ups, wanted to send an ask and accidentally unfollowed you, my bad ahaha off to a good start already lol. anyway, I'VE FINALLY READ CHAPTER 11 KICKOFF.and girl i have to tell you you capture this whole frat college lifestyle so so well, not that i have a clue what it's like but i would imagine it like this and i always feel like a early 2000 romcom reading your story and i'm just so in love with these vibes :'')) anyway ! my thoughts while reading hehe:
“Oh awesome, thanks man, needed these.” He takes the box of condoms from the top of the pile in Gojo’s arms, “we ran out of gloves.”
i'm sorry i'm loosing it already ahahah, they are all so stupid and i'm in love. and please gojo with a snapback, how can i unread this bc this is going to stay in my head for the rest of the day. & again the vibes of the story 😩😩
“Uh, I wouldn’t,” Gojo interjects, “unless you wanna be traumatized by the sight of a girl swallowing Choso whole while he’s seated on the toilet.”
OBJECTION. i wanna go there. don't ask me for the reason.
There’s a grin on Gojo’s face, “you should get mine.” “What is yours?” you ask. “Uh, I actually have no clue,” he confesses...
love how gojo is always so chocky and flirty, but then fails imidiately bc he doesn't think two steps ahead, i love him 😩😩
& did i tell you how funny todo and mina are ?? okay everyone is so funny but these too have me laughing out loud omg. i love them.
He’s grabbing your hand again, and you realize this entire afternoon might just be him taking you wherever he wants you while you essentially turn your brain off.
yes please gojo, just take us though your crazy frat boy life, i'll eat it all up. but please for the love of good, don't take us to eat, bc i'll not eat those hot dogs with condom flavour. no thank u !
Your right knee is first to press into the cushion next to his thigh, and then your left knee follows until you’re hovered above him in a straddle. Then he settles you into the warmth of his lap with an urging hand on the small of your back, and you’re akin to the way he slides you up to above his groin once you’re sat.
this whole paragraph has already made me blush like an idiot, ahhhhhhh don't be so cute with your stupid snapback !!
Listen, he’s hot enough when you’re sober, but with drink in your veins, you’re worried you might fuck him hard enough not even your birth control could save you from what you’d coax from him.
valid.
You release your grip of his shirt. He sulks about it. “I can recall you asking me to call you daddy once. Weirdo.” “Wow. I open up to you and then you kink shame me.”
ugh. i love these two so much. their banter is so cute and natural and flirty all at once. they have so good chemistry it's to die for.
until you accidentally rub your panties right over his crotch and a soft gasp leaves your lips when you realize that he’s hard underneath you.
the way i GASPED.
“You’re so pretty,” he sighs
BITTING INTO MY PILLOW.
“Pretty girl.”
SCREAMING INTO MY PILLOW.
You see one of his frat brothers standing in the frame holding up a pair of metal tongs, clacking them in the air to get his attention. “It’s your turn to grill, man.”
GRILL ON YOUR OWN, U FUCKER !!! no sorry, it's okay, i did totally, absolutely not get hot all over reading this scene. but how sweet that gojo covers her up 😩😩 ugh, give me a man like that.
Your heart drops to the ground at the same time your mouth falls open when you see her kiss him
No way! omg i can't imagine the pain for both of them. like it's not his fault but what on earth. even that girl?? bruh, i hope karma is coming for her.
If there was one thing about jealousy, it's that it’s enough to make all feelings you have for someone surface in a way that's so overbearingly powerful, so insanely potent and borderline physically debilitating that it makes you feel sick to the stomach
love that part.
BUT WAIT i did not expect her KISSING HIM then !!! u go girl !!!
but the prickle of tears in the corners of your eyes when you shut them tight makes you pull away from the kiss completely.
the way i went form "u go girl!!" to oh nauuurrr i'm sad again is insane. & omg that whole conversation is like a collercoaster of emotions, help me.
“She’s a random person who kissed you out of nowhere, like you’re just some piece of meat to toy with. It’s wrong. You’re a human being, not an object to lust over.”
100 % !! still gonna do it
His eyes widen slightly, and your heart sinks a little when you see he’s confused and trying to genuinely process your words, like it’s something no one’s ever told him before.
"no one's ever told him" why am i sad again ?? ellie can u stop ?? 😭😭 i cannot go on with these sudden turns of laughter to TEARS
“Um. You didn’t use condoms to serve these, right?” you ask as you take it from him. “N-No,” he stutters, “…why? I-Is that a request?” “No, no, no. You’re good.”
please 😭😭😭
ahh thank you so much for writing this ellie. i love love love this story so much, it was one of the first long stories i ever read here on tumblr and it has such a special place in my heart. the way you write this young college love is just so good and i'm already dreading the day the story ends :'))
i'm always amazed how effortlessly funny you can write and it just feels so genuine. i wish you the best and have the most amazing weekend <3
omg hiii nici omg i'm sobs tysm for this review <33 also so sorry im so late w responding to itttt. PLS i'm so glad you're getting 2000s romcom vibes from it because i loooove early 2000s romcom classics sm hahah.
love how gojo is always so chocky and flirty, but then fails imidiately bc he doesn't think two steps ahead, i love him 😩😩
BHAHAHAH cries yes this is my headcanon of him. like he's flirty sure but he's also kind of dumb n sweet xD
haha i'm so glad you enjoyed the couch scene!! i had sooo much fun writing it, esp just their whole conversation. him CALLING HER PRETTY GIRL :((((((( i had a line where he says "my pretty girl" but i ended up deleting it bc it made me blush too much xD i physically couldn't read thru the scene to edit it bahahah. yes him covering her uppppppppp ugh i love when men are sleazy but also gentlemanly? if that makes sense bahahha.
aaa sorry for the emotional turns omg i swear that chapter was just supposed to be some silly convo n a lil bit of drama but it ended up kinda sad in the end D: but tysm for reading and your insights omg your words mean sm to me as an author whose work i adore and learn sm from :'') much loveee <33
