I couldn't fit my version of Eclipses backstory in the comment so here it is.
Here we go: During the Eclipse the egg was mostly white with dark edges in a pattern. When hatched since the light from the sun affected the egg whenever Eclipse uses mind reading her thoughts kinda "Shine" through and others are fully aware of what small thoughts she's thinking. Or for an alternate version, She can only see a tunnel vision version of her Visions. (Try saying that five times fast) obviously she doesn't have the worlds best reputation but because of Moon and Jade mountain academy people are at least willing to accept her.
Tunnel vision version of her visions
Tunnel vision version of her visions
Tunnel vision version of her visions
lol yeah saying that's hard
I love both of these ideas so much!! this is such a great start for a full story idea for Eclipse, and I think she might become a major OC of mine! Adding to this, I love ethe idea that her egg was so bright with a circular dark pattern and I have a few different ways you can interpret that
while option two is the most likely, I like the idea of looking at the top of option three (like down on the egg not the top egg face) and seeing something that looks vaguely like an eclipse.
And with the Tunnel Visions, it's like looking up at a total eclipse, a full view for a few min but if you keep looking you start to get blinded.
I think, for Eclipse I might go with the "Tunnel Visions" idea, it sounds really interesting and can build some great story plots!
and lastly, thank you so much for this! it was so fun to run with and get ideas! thank you Soo much!!















