#lightwolf

Tagged by @justenzhe to post the last sentence I wrote from a story I’m working on. Thank you!

The world needed to change. But how? With himself, obviously, and his sword.

(I’m cheating by including the full paragraph.)

I tag @lightwolf, @arch-nemesis, and @shrrrr1mp (nothing in the meme said it had to be fanfiction :-P )

Not part of the meme, but I’m going to take this opportunity to talk about my writing process.

This sentence may or may not make it into the final draft. But it’s still really important to me. I’m approaching the chapter in my fic where I try to address “What the hell has been going on in Hidden Mist this whole time?”, and that means attempting to write some characters I’m not used to writing yet. My grasp of Zabuza in particular was shaky.

So I’m pretty pleased with this paragraph; I feel like his characterization has solidified into something I can work with. Zabuza is very, very smart—he asks sharp questions about the world and himself—, but he reaches for terrible answers (“Just kill anyone in the way. Personally.”).

hi i just have a question about this franchise: wtf???

Well lightwolf here is an answer:

echo-of-carcosa replied to your post “I just read a post that covered a weird implanted organ of the space...”

More then a hundred writers over 20+ years, with about 6 or so complete reworks and very poor communication skills or oversight.

my answer is this though

Also OP on that photo had at least one recent and legit fascist meme in the form of American conservative propaganda so….

lets spin the wheel!

/nods sagely, with a gentle, yet wise understanding and a patient smile.