Doctor: So what happened?

Me: well, it all started when I was born.

Nah, on a serious note I was just taking a break from slaving over an essay (is the concept of thresholds valid? Quick answer: NAH!! Long answer: 1500 words about mathematical models and noise). So anyways, I took a quick break, and then decided to check my email, because why not, but then I realised that there was a new chapter and that I wouldn’t be able to read it until I was done with said essay. So yeah, motivational, is what I would call this chapter, because it motivated me to finish an essay.

So anyways, the fic. Let me start:

Okay, not even two paragraphs in and I must tell you this. I love descriptions of smell. I mean, I have a very good nose (which is not the blessing people think it is. it currently is ‘fertilizer time’ at uni and I can’t concentrate because I can smell cow’s poo everywhere. Only the basement of the library is safe, everywhere else smells horrible. I now really hate all the green areas at uni. F U PARKS DEPARTMENT!!) where was i? oh yeah. So I really love when the smells are described, because people tend to forget how important they are. So kudos for that!!

His earrings?

OH SHIT OH SHIT SHOTS FIRED CALL THE POLICE

Oikawa is a giant banana disguised as a man, I am pretty sure. Also, that was mean! so mean.

Now, the drawing: the water looks really cool. And I mean everything is really cool, but can I just take a minute to be amazed by the wall. JUST WOW. Look at that people, look at those bricks I just love them wow. I love the stylistic decision used and how good it ended up looking. 12/10 gosh those are great

Back to the story:

“Don’t concern yourself with what I am” Oh no…. is he finally going to reveal being Mr Papillon all along???

Yahaba misses his lap wolf!! Baby!! Everything will be alright! I promise! I need to protect my sons from this story…….

No! My children don’t get on a fight! Now I understand why my mum was upset when I would fight with my sister. My children….

Oh drawing! Nice POV. Clothes are amazing, I love the colouring and how you make them look all natural. And wow that hair. I would die for a hair like that.

Wolfy time :D

Wolfy time D:

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Wow

Okay that was something

Wow

Let me process for a sec. Okay, I got it. I quite liked the chapter, but now I feel like something bad is going to happen. And I still don’t know how my other son is. do I need to take him to the hospital, will he be alright. What will Mr Banana-Papillon do????

And the last drawing is also quite cool. Love the trees. Those are really cool trees. But you know what I really love? the colours. I could go on and on of why I love the colours, but I can summarise it in: nice, good contrast, gets loads of info across really easily, doesn’t make me dizzy with too much colour and contrast and stuff. so yeah, I love the colours, they are amazing and make me feel happy. unless it is purple on my son’s skin. Why do you want to harm him so much. My child must be protected. I will make a group or something, calling all the co-parents of these poor children

So yeah, great chapter, amazing story. I loved the writing. Nice style, nice flow. Really cool.