JTOEL Chapter Six progress update
Um. Hi, I promise this fic isn't abandoned. I am actively working on it as we speak. But, um, I'm gonna be real; I started this fic having absolutely no clue what I was doing or where I wanted the story to really go. I mean, I had some plot points figured out, but no real... structure. It was just an idea that I posted, an idea I didn't actually think would get very popular. And then the kudos and comments started flooding in and they're still going strong even now, but here's the thing;
Chapter one no longer holds up now that I've thought the lore through and know what I want to do with this story.
And that... that is a problem. A very big one. Because in order for the story to move forward, I need to rewrite chapter one. I have to retcon some things, and that's the biggest reason as to why chapter six is taking so long to come out. Because I don't know if people will take kindly to the intro chapter being changed, I don't know if people will still like it.
I don't think anything, like, really big will change, but I kind of feel... restrained by the content in chapter one. Certain things, like the dialogue exchanged between Leo, CJ and Mikey, just no longer fit. Mikey's thought process no longer fits. And on top of that, my writing style has changed.
And I'm not quite sure what to do.
I'm stalling, to put it simply.
Is this story primarily for me? Yes, yes it is. But I still want people to like it, I still want the people who love this story to enjoy it even if the first chapter is different. I still want to share it with the world and for it to be loved.
I'm going to leave it up to a poll.
Would you, the readers of "Just This Once, Everybody Lives", be okay with me, the writer and creator of this au, changing the very first chapter to better fit the new updated lore for this story? Or would you rather it stayed the way it is?
Voting ended onJul 20, 2023