I love a dazed, out-of-it, purely broken whumpee. One who is so gone and dead to the real world, they donât notice a single thing going on. Perhaps itâs a learned coping mechanism to get through the torture. Whumpee, who is pliant to whumperâs will and clocked out to the pain not because they want to, but because itâs the only way they get through it all. Perhaps itâs what whumper was waiting forâfinally breaking them into an impossible, unrecognizable shred of a being doing barely more than living despite it all.
Whumpee, so mentally broken and having physically given up so completely that they are numb to anything happening to or around them. They see and hear and feel nothing.
Not whumper.
Not whumperâs continued torture.
Not even caretaker whoâd only just rushed in, ready to fight for whumpee, hoping and praying that whumpee hadnât yet perished, only to see them doing little more than staring up at nothing, eyes dull and unseeing, with their head rolled back, barely reacting more than the involuntary flinches of their bodyâs nervous system and not because the feel anything happening to them. Looking more dead than caretaker ever thought a still living being could be.
Dazed. Unresponsive. Gone.
And make sure a friend or loved one sees how broken theyâve become.
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âDarling, is something wrong?â Emmrich was gazing at her with that sweet, worried look. âYou donât have to drink the wine if you donât wish.â
âNo, no it isnât that,â Rook said, waving her hand. âI justâŚI didnât know this was a date.â
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Notes: throwing my hat in the ring of âwriting fanfic for something that isnât even out yetâ. yes iâm also smitten by the gentleman necromancer and his skeleton companion.
Yes, obviously she felt bad for misunderstanding his request. In Rookâs defense, Emmrich had asked if he could âsteal her awayâ for a night when the team wasnât running left and right dealing with world-ending problems. And given Emmrichâs propensity for speaking so âproperâ (which was evidently rubbing off on her a bit), that could have meant any number of things!
No it couldnât.
Unfortunately she realized that too late, which was why Rook was currently seated in the kitchen of the Lighthouse in a full suit of armor, while Emmrich was dressed in a handsome white button-up, vest, and trousers. His usual coat was missing, but Rook wasnât about to complain about seeing more of his slender yet poised form.
When she walked into the kitchen, expecting a quick conversation or something to do with Manfred, she was startled to find the kitchen had been transformed. The lamps were dimmed, the counters were lined with candles meticulously lit and arranged, and the little table now had a vase with a single embrium flower.
Emmrich stood beside one of the chairs, wringing his gloved hands together. When she had started to explain her attire, Emmrich just wore that lovesick smile on his face.
âYes, you do look every bit as magnificent as you do when youâre wielding that axe and cleaving through darkspawn,â heâd sighed.
So Rook took her seat (after Emmrich had pulled out her chair for her, of course). Manfred walked over from his place in the corner. He wore a bow tie around his bony neck. As he walked, the two wine bottles nestled in his pelvic bone clinked together.
He pulled the two bottles out and waved them enticingly, tilting his head.
âYes Manfred, thank you,â Emmrich replied. âWhite wine for myself, and a red for the lady?â
Rook shrugged and gave an apologetic look. âIâm not much of a wine drinker myself.â
âThen you could give it a try tonight,â he suggested. While he spoke, Manfred filled the glass Emmrich held, then the glass in front of Rook. âA nice red is a great place to start, but youâre welcome to a sip from my glass as well.â
The conversation flowed as easily as it always did in Emmrichâs presence. She hardly noticed when Manfred brought out their dinnersâa pasta dish Rook was certain she wouldnât be able to pronounce but would probably sound delightful coming from Emmrichâs lips.
It was lovely. And Rook couldnât help but feel like sheâd somehow tricked Emmrich into thinking she was the kind of person that was âwined and dinedâ. Yes sheâd made a mistake in showing up in full armor, but even if she hadnât misunderstood, it wasnât like she had anything fancier to wear. The alternative was the casual clothes she wore under her armor with blood and sweat stains that still didnât come out.
âDarling, is something wrong?â Emmrich was gazing at her with that sweet, worried look. âYou donât have to drink the wine if you donât wish.â
âNo, no it isnât that,â Rook said, waving her hand. âI justâŚI didnât know this was a date.â
His brow raised. Emmrich set down his fork and wiped his mouth with his cloth napkin.
âMy dear, I deeply apologize for the misunderstanding,â he explained. âI should have been more clear. You must think me a horrible cad. I can walk you back if youâd like to goâŚor perhaps you wouldnât like thatââ
âNo I didnât meanâŚthat isnât what IâŚâ Rook sighed. She rubbed her face with her hands; everything she said always came out sounding boorish next to Emmrich. With a clumsy hand, she gestured to her attire. âI was trying to explain, thatâs why I showed up in full armor. I mean, not that I have anything better.â
âAh.â Emmrich visibly relaxed and resumed eating. âYou hardly need to explain yourself to me. I certainly wasnât going to complain.â
âBut you went to all this work! You lit all these candles, you decorated, you made dinnerââ
Bones rattled angrily in a dark corner of the kitchen.
âAh, sorry,â Emmrich said, holding up a hand. âManfred made the dinner. I ran out of time while I was lighting all the candles. AndâŚIâm not the best cook, though it shames me to admit.â
A breath of laughter escaped her lips.
âYou put in a lot of effort,â she continued. âAnd I havenât had that before. And I showed up in the same rusty armor I wear for days at a time. And I donât know how to show you that Iâm entirely out of my element but I really appreciate all of this.â
Rook drew in a long breath after her ramble.
âAnd I like you. A lot.â
Emmrichâs face lit up, his expression rivaling his excitement when they stumbled onto the ruins of a catacomb weeks prior.
âI admit Iâm happy to simply be graced with your company. Perhaps I alsoâŚquite enjoy the sight of you in that armor,â he said. âBut if I could dare ask for more, Iâd rather like to walk you to home.â
After dinner, he did just that; he took her hand on his arm and walked her the whole fifteen feet to the door of her room. They stood in front of the closed door silently for a few moments. Rook shuffled from foot to foot.
âYou know, you could come in if you like,â she offered. Then she made a face. âI guess coffee is back in the kitchenâŚI donât know, it seemed like the thing people say after a date.â
Emmrich chuckled. âIâm afraid I have to decline; it would be improper after a first date.â
âEven if a lady offers? Youâre nothing if not a gentleman,â Rook replied, grinning. âVery well. Could I at least give you a kiss?â
Before he could reply, Rook leaned over and pressed a kiss to Emmrichâs cheek. His face visibly flushed.
From the doorway of the kitchen came the sound of bones knocking together as Manfred clapped happily.
âManfred, please,â Emmrich groaned. He turned his focus back to Rook, taking her hand and kissing her bruised knuckles. âGood night, my dear.â
She watched Emmrich walk away, Manfred ambling on behind him. She still wasnât sure how sheâd caught the attention of the handsome necromancer, nor how sheâd managed to hold his attention long enough to convince him she had something worthwhile to give in return. But if he still liked her after tonight, she certainly wouldnât argue.
Sheâd justâŚdouble check next time he invited her to dinner.
When Whumpee misconstrued one of Caretakerâs questions/concerns/casual comments to be something they are sorry for/ should be apologetic about or that Caretaker meant for them to stop doing that thing or was being demeaning about it.
âYouâre bleeding!â âSorry! Iâm sorry! I wonât get it on anything!â
âDoes your ankle hurt?â âI can still do the [thing Caretaker asked if they wouldn't mind doing]. It doesnât hurt that bad.â
âYouâre snifflingâŚ. Are you crying?!â âI promise I wonât be loud! I just canât stop! Iâm sorry!â
âYouâre breathing a bit loud. Is your rib hurting again? ⌠WHY ARE YOU HOLDING YOUR BREATH?!â
âYour room was a bit warm today. Is that how you like it? I sleep hot so I would end up sweating all night with my heater on that high.â (A few nights later) âC-Caretaker? Is.. is it alright if I t-take the blanket from the couch to m-my room t-tonight?â âOf course! How are you still cold when you're room is so hot? Are you feeling well?â WHY ARE ALL YOUR WINDOWS OPEN?! ITS WINTER!!â
âYou sure are hungry! Looks like your appetite is coming back.â âIâm sorry. I didnât mean to take too much. I wonât eat tomorrow to make up for it.â
âYour hair looks different!â âI know⌠I'm sorry. I didn't really like it in [old-Whumperâs-favorite-style] so I changed it. Iâll change it back though, 'cause I know it makes me more pleasing to look at. Iâm sorry.â
"Why are there bandage wrappings in the garbage?" "I'm sorry! I didn't mean to take your supplies without asking! Its just that one of my stitches opened up and it wouldn't stop bleeding."
A whumpee pleading and crying and shaking and trembling and sobbing, looking like theyâre seconds away from throwing up from their panic, and trying desperately to fix their mistake through it all: âIâm sorry! Iâm sorry! Iâm so sorry! Please! Iâm so sorry! Please! Pleeease!â
And a horrified caretaker, unsure how to react to this spiraling whumpee, and who wouldnât have thought twice about the spill on the floor and realizing just how horrible whumper must have been to cause a reaction like this for something so⌠humanly normal as an accidental mess.
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When the funny character who only ever cracks jokesâeven in the face of certain doomâ stops cracking jokes.
Thatâs when you know youâve got âem.
Maybe that last bit of torture worked. Canât joke when youâre choking on sobs.
Or maybe it was leaving them on their own for months on end without no one to joke to. Laughing at your own jokes in the suffocating silence just doesnât work as well.
Or maybe it was when they were shown just how desperate the situation was. How completely futile having hope was. Itâs hard to joke when thereâs no hope left at all.
I love when itâs Whumpeeâs seemingly-irrational fear towards something that the team/Caretaker thinks is normal/mundane that suddenly gives team/Caretaker a small look into the absolute horrors that Whumpee had experienced while with Whumper.
Bonus points if the team/Caretaker had no idea (or very limited idea) of what happened to Whumpee while with Whumper and Whumpee refused to talk to them about it. And now Whumpeeâs panic towards certain things was their first understanding of Whumpeeâs horrific experiences.
Or perhaps Whumpee had been good at hiding their fears and panic attacks before but a particularly bad day had them breaking down and pulling them into horrific memories as the team/Caretaker helplessly watches them fall apart, finally realizing how badly Whumper truly affected them and start to understand Whumper had done more to Whumpee than they ever could have imagined.
Mentioned/implied under cut: non-con, water torture, lap whump, needles, drugging, pet whump, gagged, punishments
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Whumpee scared of loud/sudden noises? A dropped bowl? And book set down too loudly? Loud voices? - Whumper didnât like noise and punished Whumpee for every noise they made and if they ever dared to speak or talk back they were gagged
Horror when someone ELSE holds a knife to make dinner? - sharp objects in the hands of others usually meant pain for Whumpee
Wonât take/make themself food without asking someone first and gets nervous even when theyâre given a plate? - they couldnât eat without Whumperâs permission and certainly not the same kind of food as Whumper ate
Whumpee panics if they make even a minor mess or freaks if a room is a bit too messy? - anything less than spotless perfection meant Whumpee was punished and forced to clean while still in pain from the punishment
Panic at doctor appointments/medical settings? - Whumper had an affinity for using drugs and needles during the whumping or they were in a lab-whump scenario
Whumpee afraid of showers/baths? - Water torture of some sort, repeatedly had their head forced under water and almost drowning as punishment or non-con while naked and vulnerable
Whumpee terrified of sleeping in a bed or sitting on furniture? - (pet)Whumpee not allowed to use âhumanâ furniture or perhaps more non-con whenever Whumpee was âallowedâ in bed
Scared to fall asleep at all? - Whumper never allowed them to rest or theyâd wake up to awful things happening to or around them
What about a Whumper who knows Caretaker is getting too close. Knows theyâll find Whumpee and them soon. Knows that they wonât be able to win against Caretaker when they do. Whumper knows Caretaker will get Whumpee back.
So they sow as much fear and mistrust towards Caretaker as they can into Whumpee before they do. One last âF- youâ to Caretaker when Whumpee is terrified and mistrusting of them during (and well after) the rescue.
Or maybe Whumpee knew Caretaker before and were friends but now Whumper makes sure Whumpee associates awful pain and fear with the fun things Caretaker and Whumpee used to do as friends. They make it so Caretaker may get Whumpee back at Whumperâs expense, but they never really get their Whumpee back.