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This is a middle teaser of very long fanfic I’m working on about Jack and an OC named rose or AKA Mother Nature. I’m really just looking for feed back of how it looks. If you have the time PLEASE READ and PLEASE COMENT. COME ON GUYS IF U LOVE ME ULL READ IT Thank you :) My breaths became increasingly hard control as I stared into Jack light blue eyes. Even though the pain was becoming imbarible I smiled at him. The eyes I saw, still entangled me even now when they were filled with horribly deep concern. 
“Jack,” I said as his eyes began to fill with tears. My voice sounded so raspy and heavy it was so… Strange. “I was so scared. I thought I wouldn’t get to see you before… I died.”
“Rose!” He screamed grabbing my hand, “No Rose don’t die!” his eyes were focused on the whole in my gut. Pitch would pay for this. This was Jacks only thought, “I wont let you leave me! You can’t. You can’t die!” His frozen hands felt nice on my numb fingers. ” I called the Guardians! You,” He started to break down, ” you just need to stay with me till they come!” I was beginning to nod when a sharp pain in my neck made it impossible. I drew a breath to speak again but he stopped me, ” Save your strength!” he comanded. I was resistant. What if this really was my end? There were things I needed to tell him.
“Ever since I woke up every ones been lying to me.” his eyes widened, ” The only one I had for guidance was North. And he always tended to confuse me more then help. Everyone kept referring to memories that I couldn’t recall. I didn’t know who I was and that frightened me. I felt like I was being obsevered by everybody. I wanted to talk to some one about it but I didn’t trust anyone. I got so scared that a ran away and met Sam… Even though I didn’t know it at the time I felt connected to him because he reminded me of you. When he died I felt like I had nothing left to live for. Thats when my memories of you flooded back into my head. Suddenly I was filled with a new light and felt like I was coming out of a daze.” My eyes became dreary as my words began to slur together. The pain in my body was replaced with a numbing feeling, “Jack, our love is eternal, even when I awoke I always felt safest by your side despite everything. I understand that you are trying to save me from my cursid fate, but I always knew that this was coming.” My head was spinning. “This death isn’t unexpected… Iv been a walking casket for a while now… You know that…” I w so…tired and… angry. “but why… why did you leave me Jack.” His teeth clenched as tears like rain fell from his shadow face. “Why did you leave me to feel… so much pain The pain has to stop I can’t take anymore pain.” I was crying now, “So pease just let me die and-“
“Shut up!” he yelled cutting me off, “Why are you so intent on dieing! Do you remember what I promised you on that lake? I promised that I would save you and I plan on keeping it! You will live on! You will NOT leave me!” My heart froze at his words. 
“But Jack I can’t-“
“I wasn’t asking your promision.” My eyes suddenly filled with fresh tears I wanted to live on to see Jack again but how could I when day by day I was becoming weaker. I was going to die soon…but… was so scared… I didn’t want to die.
Then the pain started again… The pain was dragging me into sleep and I didn’t have the energy to resist. “I cant… keep… my eyes open… jack… Jack,” I said as my eyelids closed and darkness crept in.
“What? No!” Jack sounded so distance now. “No you need to stay awake! Jus-just a bit longer! Stay awake just a bit longer!” he began to shake me and with each movement the darkness dragged me farther into it’s cave. “Please just please! Open your eyes!” he begged, “Say something Rose! Rose!” 
“Promiss when I wake up again I will wake up to the old you again.”
Then I reached my breaking point and gave into my subconscious.