#iwannabeawriter

So I may or may not be working on a new story (I totally am). I'm trying to figure out intricacies at the moment. If I posted snippets or chapters on here, would some of you guys give me feedback?

I always love the ones that make it to hard to love.. do I like the challenge? Do I like the pain? I give you my everything and all I get is nothing. Forgive me for when that day comes and I will have no more will to fight for the love of you.

Days go on forever but I have not left your side, we can chase the dark together if you go then so will I. There is nothing left of you I can see it in your eyes, say the last goodbye. Hope fills the heart and fades away as the sky returns to grey. I keep holding onto you but I can’t bring you back to life, I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less I like. Is it over yet, in my head? Is it over yet? I can’t win. You take the breath right out of me. You left a hole where my heart should be. You got to fight just to make it through, cause I will be the death of you. I’m waiting, I’m praying, realize, start hating. Here I stand, helpless and left for dead. Close your eyes, so many days go by. Easy to find what’s wrong, harder to find what’s right. I believe in you, I can show you that I can see right through all your empty lies. I won’t stay long, in this world so wrong. Trembling, crawling across my skin. Feeling your cold dead eyes, stealing the life of mine. I have nothing left to give I have found the perfect end you were made to make it hurt disappear into the dirt. Take the time to take my breath I will end where I began and I will find the enemy within cause I can feel it crawl beneath my skin. The lights go out let forever drag me down I will fight for one last breath I will fight until the end. Don’t bury me faceless enemy I’m so sorry. Leave me alone God let me go I’m blue and cold black sky will burn love pull me down hate lift me up just turn around there’s nothing left. Somewhere far beyond this world I feel nothing anymore. If I had to I would put myself right beside you So let me ask would you like that? And I don’t mind if you say this love is the last time. Something’s getting in the way. Something’s just about to break. Try to find out what makes you tick. As I lie down sore and sick. There’s a fine line between love and hate. Desperate, I will crawl waiting for so long no love, there is no love. Die for anyone what have I become? Take a breath hold it in start a fight you won’t win had enough let’s begin never mind I don’t care. All in all you’re no good you don’t cry like you should let it go if you could when love dies in the end. So I’ll find what lies beneath your sick twisted smile as I lie underneath your cold jaded eyes now you turn the tide on me cause you’re so unkind I will always be here for the rest of my life. Here we go does it hurt say goodbye to this world I will not be undone come to life it gets worse. I’ll be gone when you fall your sad life says it all. Don’t carry me under you’re the devil in disguise God sing for the hopeless I’m the one you left behind.