#gwenyn

Hello!

Name: Abelie Gwenyn

Meaning: bees

(Nothing- Nothing else here, friend? No meaning besides bees? Not a thing. There’s overcommitment to gimmick, and then there’s having nothing but the gimmick.)

Blood: Yellow

(Well, Alternian Bees are not yellow, but purple.)

(So she doesn’t have to be yellow! In fact, making her purple would be an interesting development…) Sign: Gemicorn

(SIGN OF THE ANARCHIC) (I am going to design her around:)

(CAPRIBORN: SIGN OF THE MALIGNANT) (It even looks like insect wings!) Lusus: a giant and fuzzy bee (contemplated a bear because honey)

(Moving her to Purple gives her move opportunities. I’m thinking a Giant Queen Bee Larva- part of Abelie’s prowess as a beekeeper is trying to keep this giant, kind of useless lusus fed with royal jelly properly, as she tends the hive and bees that the lusus has grown around itself.)

Trollian Handle: attentiveAntennae[AA]

(This is cute and I’m in favor of keeping it. Gonna make this a bit more sinister later on.)

Typing quirk: replaces all “s” sounds with “zz” and uses the emoticon %:) and other variations

(This is good, scans easily and isn’t a nightmare to type.)

Weapon: a blow dart gun with darts coated in poison honey (she brews it herself)

Special abilities: wings

(We do know that this is a thing trolls can manifest (and their godtiers all having wings to me implies it being an evolution of the troll form but..))

Outfit: a white scarf over a black t-shirt, and underneath that is a black tank top. She also wears a yellow striped skirt, and slippers. (Check CD’s design breakdown later on!)

Personality: Abelie is an overly optimistic but always frightened troll, having been constantly warned since she was young about her dangerous wing mutation. She’s only 6, but has lived in isolation for most of her life, and is quick to attach herself to anyone who she encounters that is kind to her. She’s been told that she’ll die if she goes out in public with her wings as well as other warnings, but sometimes she ignores those warnings. She has a job as a beekeeper, selling her honey online through the drones. Since she can’t really go in front of the drones, her lusus delivers the honey for her.

(I don’t really think you’ve built a Rage player at all here. There’s no chaos, no inner turmoil that she’s bringing to the surface.) (Let’s take parts of your current story and weave it into her new purple prose:) (Born with a latent mutation that fully developed as she got older, Abelie has been hiding her whole life- wrapped behind veils of clothes and Chucklevoodoos. Hiding herself physically as well as emotionally, Abelie tends to her hives and to her lowblooded friends- sometimes physically kicking them into overdrive to do what she wants (or thinks is best for them). Knowing that if she were ever caught, she’d be culled instantly, Abelie nurses a venomous hate deep within her for the Church of The Mirthful Messiahs, who seek to subjugate the lowbloods and cull any who threaten the “perfect” homogeneity of Alternia. Queen Bee’s gonna take them all down a peg.)

Ancestor: the Beetamer

Lunar Sway: Prospit

(I have moved her to Derse to better emphasize the Hidden Mutant angle- she’s someone naturally inclined to hide herself!)

God tier: Maid of Rage (Main suggestion: Prince of Rage)

(If you want her to be a Maid, she has to actively create and become rage. She has to have enough burning emotion in her that it pours out and spreads around her. Maids of Rage create paranoia, rage, and fear directly. They inspire these things just by existing within a session. They have to learn how to work with that and use it to their team’s advantage.) (In my writeup of her, I have her written as a Prince, the Active destroyer. This is accomplished by her going after the Messiahs and the subjugglation system.)

Fetch Modus: Honeycomb- she must place each item inside of a hexagon, waiting for it to pupate before taking it out

(Cute.)

Land: I’m not quite sure yet, I’m sorry!

I think that’s all of it! Sorry if I missed anything. Thank you!

Design Time!

There's shuffling, before a camera turns on. The picture slowly fades in.

//This is what he looks like now, but it'll be awhile before I can remake his sprites ;;

The smaller gold immediately perked up, happy for the company.

"--Oh wow, it zure haz! It'z nice to zee you, how've you been??--"