A bit from the Prologue of Acme off it's axis part 1
I made this with uberduck and some edited sounds I recorded. I also edited the pick of the boss lady because I haven't drawn her yet.
The Chamber as I wrote it
Zadavia pressed her hand against the cold glass as she gazed out at the endless blue that stretched before her. A constant mellow hum filled the confines of the metallic space. The natural melody offered her little comfort as a flood of worries crashed around in her mind. The sound of creaking walls joined the chorus every so often. A sound she'd grown accustomed to after weeks of hiding in the deeps. Her concerns were not for the integrity of the building. Much weightier matters plagued her. "This is foolishness." She thought, glazing her hand across the cold surface. "Click, click, click." A sharp noise interrupted her thoughts.
What do you have to report, 'General Deuce'? She asked, without turning to address the source of the sound."I'm afraid it isn't good 'my queen." The young, red-haired man answered in a serious tone.
"What is the problem then, 'Deuce'?" Has he found me? "Zadavia said as she faced him with a look that was more of anger than fear.
No, my Queen, it isn't that. I'm confident that he has no clue that you are on this planet. I would even go so far as to say that he has no idea this backward planet even exists. " The young general said, dripping with confidence. One of his quirks that Zadavia had always found 'vexing. But, she could not deny it was well-founded. Deuce had not become a general at his young age through pure dumb luck but through sheer raw talent.
It's the Renraw containment chamber, your highness. I'm afraid that we can't keep powering it much longer.
Zadavia looked at him with disbelief. Tell me, why is that? From what my science officer told me, I thought we had found a suitable power supply from the 'earth people."
"The earthling's Viridiallum has been working, but please listen, my Queen, it isn't stable. It's been fluctuating. It even seems to be messing up the controls. " Zadavia was still doubtful and asked him yet another question.
"Why isn't my science officer reporting this instead of you?"
"She was scared to approach you about it," I told her she should do it herself, but that is beyond the point. Zadavia, you must choose which of my men you wish to bestow the Renraw Spectrum upon. We are running out of time. "Your people are running out of time.
Take me to the containment chamber. I want to see it for myself. I will not make any decisions blinded by fear. " Zadavia's voice was commanding and stern, as it usually was, but only with more seriousness.
"I thought you would." General Deuce said, gesturing for her to follow him.
They walked through several security doors before they came to a room filled with scrapped spaceship parts and several broken earth gadgets.
Oh, Queen Zadavia! You're here. I'm happy to say that your ship is coming along very nicely. Even having to use these inferior parts for it. Oh' um, do you want to see it? " "A middle-aged woman said as she hopped over piles of junk to see her queen."
Dellmay, I want to see the Renraw Spectrum chamber. Now! " Zadavia raised her voice to the blue and yellow-haired scientist. Dellmay's face went paler blue as she fell over into the pile of parts, stunned by her Queen's tone.
"Yes, right away, your majesty." She scrambled to get on her feet. "I told you she would be angry," Deuce whispered as he helped her to her feet.
I'm so sorry, your highness. I should have told you, but I thought I could stabilize it. Of course, I know I can still do it. "
Enough of this yapping. Just show me what's wrong. " Zadavia snapped.
"Yes, right away. Aivadaz! Bring up chamber diagnostics, please. " Dellmay ordered the computer's AI.
"Bringing up the diagnostics now." I see Queen Zadavia is here. Do you wish to take control, Zadavia? " The AI asked.
"Yes, Aivadaz, I would." She glared angrily at Deuce and Dellmay, who turned away in shame.
"Switching control of the chamber to Queen Zadavia now." Dellmay stared down at her feet. "I hope one day you can forgive me..." Zadavia, She said' fighting her tears back. I'm...Dellmay began but was stopped by a finger to her lips. "Aivadaz needs to hear her." The general whispered in her ear. That's correct. I'm sorry, Deuce. " She whispered back.
"Aivadaz, "show me what is going on with the chamber." Zadavia ordered sternly.
"Aivadaz! I said, Show me what is going on with the chamber!"