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i was the flame conceived in and by reason of darkness.

[ID: A Scum Villain (post-reconciliation) comic where Yue Qingyuan, as hosted by Xuan Su, taunts Shen Jiu by claiming all it will ever recognize "Shen Qingqiu" as will be the "Xiao-Jiu" Yue Qi suffered for. End ID.]

so essentially i was wondering what your thoughts are regarding the viz translation vs. what light actually said. this came to me in a dream (= i was skimming thru the manga in rioplatense spanish and he complimented her explaining AND drawing skills in it so i was like Hey hold on he's far drier than this in english. what did he say in japanese.)

Anyway i hope this isnt silly and thank you!

!!!!!!!! not silly at all thank you!!!

結構上手いじゃないか　それにわかりやすい hey, that's pretty good. and it's easy to understand, too.

@flowereypainting since i got this whole idea from your Lulia drawing, i thought you'd be interested to see the progress !

I'll explain since i know my storyboard process looks messy( well its supposed to be).

So first Lulia pushes away Ronbo who was in the previous segment

And she makes a toast, tinkling her glass with a spoon and leading into ''Bill I believe this is killing me''-- all while a spotlight is on her, our dramatic queen ofc

Then Jerafina is watching Lulia and daydreaming with a goofy expression but when Lulia makes her toast, Jera gets sad, understanding what was just said ''as the smile ran away from his face''

SO SHE RUNS TO LULIAS SIDE

And says '' well i'm sure that you could be a movie star''- and it segues into a sequence of Lulia as a starlet, red carpet, cameras flashing, the whole deal!

Lulia replies ''If i could''- and it cuts back to reality- ''get out of this place''- burying her face in her hands

AND THEN SHE RUNS AWAY(jerafina chasing)

Straight into Tiffs arms, who is alarmed when her singing\humming is interrupted( Tiff is the singer for the ''la di da'' segments)

She almost drops her mic but Jerafina catches it and continues the singing\humming while Lulia has a good cry, Tiff catches on to whats happening though she was initially surprised, she sympathises

They both sing to soothe her and finally in return, Lulia pulls them into a group hug!

Part 2: Right To The Source (ft. @iristhedarkwitch )

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