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SOULMATE AU

f!reader X soft!sunghoon

Read part 2 here !!

Content :: Fluff, worshipful Sunghoon, SUNGHOON HELPING YOU BATHE but not in a sexual way ifywim

Note :: I have written fanfics before but it’s been a while, I have no idea how to navigate this app, I kinda had a thought and I made the acc, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give me feedback (but don’t be harsh) I know I’m not the best but I want to improve. Also tell me how to be aesthetic that’s my main inspo ANDDD give me Enha fic suggestions if you wanna idk how this works so pretend you’re talking to a 5 year old pls no abbreviations 😔

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Alright friends, this is my first fic and it is an Azriel x Reader, this is my first one and maybe there will be a second part but that’s up to you guys.

POV: you find out Azriel’s you mate but you start getting the could shoulder from him after he returns from a mission.

A/N: Like I said part one of probably 2, y’all let me know.

You couldn’t take it anymore, you just needed to get away. You found out that Azriel was your mate about 2 months ago, it didn’t shock you at all because you’ve loved this man your whole life. What you couldn’t stand was how much he had been ignoring you and giving you the cold shoulder.

You were in an official meeting with the inner circle when the bond snapped for you. Rhys had been talking about the uprising in some of the camps and how they would need to go and sort it out, they as in Cassian and Azriel. When Rhys had said one of the uprising camps was the one you grew up in both you and Azriel tensed although you didn’t note his reaction at first because in the tense emotions of thinking of back home, that’s when the bond snapped for you.

You thought maybe Azriel felt it too but you couldn’t be sure. You thought the bond would be this warm feeling in your chest but it just felt cold and distant. You would have to check with Rhys to see if that’s how he felt after he found out Fayre was his mate.

After the meeting Cassian and Azriel left immediately for their respective camps, Azriel going to the one you grew up in where your father and mother still lived. Luckily your mom was friends with Rhys mother from a young age so you were able to keep your wings and not get clipped but that didn’t save you from the full extent of your fathers wrath. That was a reason you were so scared for Azriel to go, he knew the whole history of how your father had treated you, the beatings and public humiliation being the smaller transgressions. Azriel had walked out of Rhys’ office so quickly after they were dismissed that you weren’t able to get a word in, you said your goodbyes and be safe to Cassian and when you went to find Azriel you found Mor instead.

“He already left lovey.” Mor said with a sad smile. You knew that her using that pet name for you wasn’t a good sign and that she could probably tell what was going through your mind. You ran away before she could get a word in otherwise because the tears would fall.

Everyone left you alone for the month Azriel was gone sensing that there was something going on and that if you wanted to talk about you would find them. Fayre tried talking to you but you shut her out immediately.

When Azriel and Cassian got back you were in the dinning room enjoying some breakfast, as they passed by you Azriel didn’t even look at you and Cassian gave you a weak smile. You tried to feel down the bond but there was absolutely nothing, just cold and dark, it made your heart break.

Over the next few weeks you were thinking that giving Azriel space would be the answer and that he’d be coming to join you in either training or in the library for a night cap like he used to do so often before the bond snapped for you. There was nothing, you never ran into him even though you could hear his foot steps throughout the house as if the house wanted you to know where he was. There were also times when you’d see some of his shadows lurking about, some would come right up to you as if you were their master and swirl under your hair and around your neck. Maybe they were here on his behalf and maybe they’d report back to him, you didn’t know and tried not to care.

Once a month hit from his return of your home camp you needed to get out, get away, it was all too much. You found yourself outside of Rhys’s office at the river house once your mind was made up.

“Are you sure you want to go away for that long?” He had asked you.

“I want the same thing that was given to Fayre, time up in the cabin alone and sheilded so that no one knows I’m there. I need a break” Your eyes had a pleading look in them with a tinge of heartbreak too.

“When do you want to leave” Rhys said sighing in disbelief. The house of Wind has been your home for many years, and he didn’t think that any of the jobs he’s given you were so strenuous that you needed to be away from your family.

“I’m ready to go now, I packed my bags before I came to see you. And I want Mor to take me, if you take me there will be too many questions.”

Surprised at you readiness to leave he agreed and got in touch with Mor, she appeared almost instantaneously making you think she was just outside listening in. “Ready to go lovey?” She had asked, you nodded your head too afraid of speaking just in case your voice broke. “Then off we go.”

You arrived at the cabin up in the wilderness within a moment and when you walked in and saw all the artwork, you wanted to cry. Having your family all around you while being so far away brought you some comfort but not much. You looked to where the eyes were and found Azriel’s right away.

“Do you need anything, want me to stay for a bit?” Mor asked breaking you out of your trance.

“No I think I’m good, just need to be away from everything, everyone.” You said trying to add a laugh in at the end but the sound was strained and laced with pain.

“Who’s ass do I have to beat, because I don’t care who it is, I’ll beat them up for you. Just give me a name.” Mor tried to get you to laugh but a look in your eyes showed that it was a love problem and although she didn’t know about the bond you have to Azriel, she does know that you’ve had a crush on him for centuries. “Maybe, he’ll realize what was missing since it’s not in front of him anymore.” She said with a weak smile.

You returned the smile and with sad eyes responded “Yeah, maybe.” And without saying goodbye she left knowing that if you spoke anymore that might be your downfall and it would all come out.

Two weeks you had been up at the cabin in pure silence and peace. You brought some books with you in order to pass the time, not like you’d get bored but you were lonely. Rhys and more stayed true to their word so far and haven’t tried to visit or try and get through your mental shield, you also went as far to build a wall up to the bond, feeling nothing was better than feeling the coldness that it brought with it.

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Part 1!!

Summary: When Harvey finds out Louis has a younger sister, he’s all eager to meet her, especially since she’s coming to visit..

Though, what he gets isn’t exactly what he’s expecting.

Because she’s.. confident.. and.. hot…

(Timeline; Season 3, after the initial merger and in the middle of the Ava Hessington case.)

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The watch on Harvey’s wrist had just struck 1:00 a.m, he sighed, running a hand over his face, eyebags evident despite all the caffeine he had to mask it.

Rain softly pattered on the glass walls of his office, the moon now visible in the sky as the stars glimmered overhead. He still had to file this subpoena since Mike had already left, and maybe have a glass of scotch with his favorite secretary. Though, truthfully, at this hour, he’d rather be at home, or in bed with another woman he’d find at a bar.

Unfortunately for him, neither of those two things were going to happen tonight. Because being a corporate lawyer demanded long, unforgiving, ungodly hours of work. But, thankfully for him, he had Donna as a secretary, and as a friend. Who didn’t leave until he left. Though, that fact didn’t stop the oncoming migraine from how incompetent his client was.

“Rat bastards..”

He muttered under his breath, growing more frustrated, sighing as he put his pen down.

“Is that really any way to talk about a client, Harvey?”

He looked up at the sound of another voice, Donna’s. She was standing calmly in the doorway of his office, holding two glasses, knowing he had scotch hidden in his desk. He smirked at her tone, gesturing his head for her to come in as he stood up, grabbing the scotch from his drawer.

“It is if they can’t hear me.”

He replied coolly, meeting her eyes with a smirk plastered onto his face. Despite his composed and confident facade, Donna knew him well enough to know he needed sleep, not more caffeine or scotch.. though tonight she’ll make an exception, because she had ‘tea,’ to spill.

“Did you hear? Or do I have to be your little birdie again?”

She inquired, Harvey raised a brow as he began to pour the glasses of scotch, glancing at her as he did and spoke.

She seemed.. intrigued, and.. perhaps.. curious? That was a hard reaction to get from the Donna.

“Lemme guess this time.”

He said, now handing her a glass with one hand, taking a sip of his own with the other.

“You can sure as hell try, but you wouldn’t guess it in a million years, Harvey.”

Donna said, taking a sip alongside him as she sat in one of his office’s couches. Harvey moved to sit across from her as he placed his glass on the table and lounged comfortably on the chair.

“Well? Go on, you don’t act like this for nothing, Donna.”

She smirked, crossing her legs as she put her glass on the coffee table as well, leaning in as if telling a secret. Her voice became curious, and gossipy.

“Louis has a younger sister, and she’s coming to visit. Louis even said, quote; ‘My sister is coming to town! My sister is coming to town!’ Like a schoolboy in an old Disney movie, people swear someone saw him clicking his heels together.”

Harvey raised his eyebrows, interested and amused. He leaned back, nodding to Donna as he questioned some more;

“And? Is she hot?” -Harvey

“Harvey! Manners!” -Donna.

“What? I wanna know.”-Harvey

He grinned for just a moment, putting his hands up in the air as if caught, his smirk growing just a tad bit wider, looking at Donna with mischief in his eyes. And he stood up and finished the rest of his scotch. She wasn’t really that offended, just amused while continuing, the conversation fading into casual banter.

This would be interesting.

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The following days, Harvey didn’t give it much thought. He had more important things on his mind, cases, his work, job, life…

Okay, maybe he thought about it once or twice. He certainly did notice how Louis seemed.. Giddy.. how he had a smile plastered onto his face, pep in his step, Harvey even saw him lip syncing to a Britney Spears song in his office to ‘Get pumped up.’

He wanted to erase his horrible dance moves from his brain. Though inventions in science haven’t gone that far yet.

Days went by, and even the associates seemed disturbed by Louis’s change of mood. So much so, a few even came to him, asking if he knew something about Louis’s new behavior.. he did, but he liked a show.

Though Mike was curious, he found out through Donna. Yes, he asked the same question

“Is she hot?” -Famous last words of ‘Mike Ross.’

To be truthful, the office also became curious of this ‘mysterious sister’ of Louis Litt. Surely she couldn’t be that amazing, or that pretty. She was Louis Litt’s sister.

…Man was he wrong.

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The day you walked through the halls of Pearson Darby, was the day Harvey couldn’t believe his eyes for once.

As your heels clicked satisfyingly on the marble floors of the firm, your chin held high, associates paused as you walked by, many looked up from their folders and papers. Mike wondered why the office went quiet for a few moments, even he could feel the shift in people’s attention. You didn’t make small talk, simply winked at a few people eyeing you as you walked by, waved slightly, and smiled at a few.

You could feel their gawking, but it didn’t affect you much.. and you strode into Louis’s office, smiling and opening your arms for a hug.

“Louis! Hermano! Oh, how it has been so long!”

(hermano = brother.)

You exclaimed, pulling your sunglasses down as you walked over to him. He excitedly jumped up from his chair, practically speed walking to reach you faster. He hugged you tightly, laughing slightly as he picked you off the floor just slightly.

“Y/n! I’m so happy to see you! Did you have a good flight? Was the drive here okay?”

He inquired immediately, of course, it’s always Louis making sure his sister was being treated and cared for correctly.

“Si, everything was wonderful, thank you for taking care of the arrangements, hermano.”

(Si = yes.)

He smiled, nodding, though.. his eyes were worried, and he sighed, moving to sit back down.. truthfully, you had caught him at a bad time.

“I’m sorry, Y/n, I didn’t think you’d arrive this early.. I can’t show you around right now-“

You quickly interrupted him, placing a single finger over his lips,

“Louis! No! Cálmate, I’ll show myself around.”

(Cálmate = calm yourself)

His eyebrows raised as he nodded, your finger still on his lips. You smirked, moving back as you placed your coat on his chair and your purse on his desk.

“Take care of these for me, will you? I’d love to explore.”

He let out a drawn out exhale, though not annoyed, fond. He approved with a dip of his chin, gesturing for you to go with the grin of a golden retriever on his face.. you smiled, more genuinely, almost feeling bad to be leaving him so fast.. but you knew he had work to do.. and having his ‘annoying,’ little sister around wasn’t going to help. You sighed, walking over to him as you playfully flicked his head and leaned down to his level.

“I’ll be back soon, okay?”

He went back to his work with a small frown, wanting to spend time with you but stuck up with work.. and with that, you were free!

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You had always heard about the firm, Louis has held it in high regards. He described it as a ‘Well oiled machine of lawyer-ism.’ Which, wasn’t inaccurate, maybe could’ve been worded better though.

The sun shone in through the floor-to-ceiling windows, casting a glow on anyone who walked by, including you. You walked as if you belonged, striding through the halls of the executive floor. You walked into the library, a little shocked at just how many books they had solely on law, Louis wasn’t kidding. You explored and discovered new rooms, a few empty offices up for the taking, and, the break room. Associates stared when you walked into the break room, blinking in confusion as they watched you make your own cup of coffee and steal a mug, clearly labeled “Litt’s mug,” which either meant you were betting your life, or close to Louis.

People were putting two and two together.

You walked towards the bigger offices near Louis, nearly having done a full circle. You continued until you saw a secretary’s desk.. with the nameplate of “Donna.”

Coming up to her with a smile, you waved slightly to catch her attention, she looked up, confused yet utterly composed.

“You must be the Donna I hear so much about, Havey’s secretary right? Pleasure to meet you, I’m Y/n Litt.”

Donna was going to enjoy watching this unfold, she was already imagining how Harvey’s gonna react.

Sure, she was a little caught off guard, but composed herself quickly, of course she did, she’s Donna.

“Yes I am,” she replied kindly, standing up to reach her hand out, “and Louis talks about me? Oh I’m flattered.”

She spoke with a hint of teasing in her voice, her smile very close to being a smirk. Though, if she wanted to see Harvey’s reaction first hand, she’d do it herself. And introduce them.

“Does he talk about Harvey? I bet he’d love to hear,” her voice suggested just a little bit of mischief, and her eyes glinting with interest.

You shook her hand calmly, glancing around as if sharing a secret before nodding to Donna.

“It’s as if he’s an idol.” You confirmed, eyes glinting with mischief to match the tone of her voice, her brows lifted in amusement and satisfaction as she gestured for you to follow her into Harvey’s office.

“This’ll be fun.”

She murmured, rounding the corner, you caught sight of the man, Harvey Spector himself, inside his office, standing by his desk while looking at his basketball collection. His hands rested inside his pockets, and he turned around when he heard the sound of heels clacking in his direction.

Donna noticed it instantly, the way his gaze swept over you, how his eyes flickered with interest, how he shifted his attention to you.. my, my… She walked you in, opening the door for you, you thanked her silently, Donna casting a warning glance to Harvey, as if saying; “be careful with this one.”

He tilted his head at Donna, her reaction gave him some sort of warning he should be at least a little wary. He smirked and dipped his chin once at the redhead, fully facing them now as Donna broke the silence.

“Harvey, I want you to meet Y/n, I just met her outside the door.” She said, winking at him once before moving to the side to let you introduce yourself.

You caught notice of how they silently communicated, raising a brow at Donna, who seemed amused you had caught on so quick. You let out a small huff through your nose, walking calmly towards Harvey and reaching your hand out.

“She forgot to mention my brother, Louis Litt, professional pain in the ass, you’ve heard of him, haven’t you? The reason I’m here.”

Harvey took your hand, shaking it firmly. He noticed the glint in your eyes, the way you held yourself, how your hips swayed when you walked.. how your lips seemed so soft.

Donna nearly let out a small snort, seeing his reaction to meeting you…

This is going to be.. so entertaining..

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The end of part one!!

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In case the sketch is not readable enough: it has 3 pairs of arms (2 pairs bound), it has 9 eyes (8 of them covered by cloth), it has a snakes lower jaw so there’s a split for the tongue to go through, its horns grow through its jaw as do its leg spikes through its feet and its spine spikes through its bound arms. It’s 3 meters (~9.84 ft) high without the spine spikes and with its hunched over posture. It’s also capable of turning its head 180.