heyo!! first off, power in my neighborhood is back to normal and i can finally use my laptop

SECOND i spent the last few days going over and adjusting my notes for both hunger ‘verse and dha kar’ta, and realised i fudged the details of the holo from lom (in chapters 5, 6, 8 and 9) and made a plot hole that i’m not sure if people would notice, but i notice and my obsessive compulsive brain refuses to move on without fixing it 🥲

so i’ve done just that! the final scenes in chapters 5, 6, and 8 are now lightly rewritten, as well as a portion of obi-wan’s holocall with dooku in the last section of chapter 9. i’ve bolded all the changed lines, and i do recommend going back and reading the new versions! i think it’s a minor enough retcon, but might confuse you later so