#critic request

hi uh!!! i run a sprite blog and so i decided hey why not try and actually improve??? i havent sprited in a while tho lol

i like sticking with the original sprites mostly, just adding on extra details like to the hair and glasses and stuff, just to make them more ‘appealing’

(hand base here!!!)

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Ooh, I really like your Vriska sprite? Something about how the hair and glasses looks especially looks very appealing to me. I like the teeny details like the shine on the lipstick as well! 

May I get a critique on this one? I tried to keep it mostly canon in design with the exception of his hair and horns, which are gelled and polished.

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I think the sprite looks great! I like the lil shine on the horns. The sprite is nice and clean as well. 

Ok, heres the one i really need critique on, my heinoustuck itchy 01 design. Hes supposed to be based off some of the fastest animals on earth (cheetahs, hawks, to a MUCH more minor extent rabbits), but i feel like I kind of did a terrible job.

Also heres the ones im proudest of just so you can see. I know that the background on the crowbar one is fucked but thats because I was on the computer at the time instead of my phone like normal so i basically used online ms paint

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Hmm, I think the designs are solid enough! I like Crowbar’s design the best. 

hi! i’ve been spriting for a few months now and i wanted to know some things i can improve on ^^ (oldest to newest from left to right)

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This sprite’s a lil old but this was my first canon sprite and i thought id just show you to see if i could get any tips since im planning on redoing it :“3

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I like this design! I’m a big fan of the colors. I especially like shoes and the little hair band with the candy hearts and the little candies on the fins. 

I feel like the freckles should be a little bit more spaces out

like this!

I decided to make an official sprite for my first homestuck oc Tistra! I made her in like 7th grade so she has purple hair bc… why not. I grew attached to it.

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I think this looks great! The fantroll design is cute, the lines are very neat and all in all it’s very pleasing to look at. I like how the hair and pants are drawn, and the little freckles too. 

I actually don’t have any complaints for this... maybe make the ends of the jacket a little bit more curved? That’s just a nit pick though. 

I left the community a while back, but you still have my most favorite sprites ever. This is an oldie, I used some of your sprite base parts on it (the hair and skirt i believe), but I made the hat myself. Thoughts on it?

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YO

This looks so nice!

Hats are the bane of my existence but this looks great, as is the design as a whole. The gradient on the skirt is a really nice touch, and the hairstyle is very cute.

I’m not a big fan of noses on sprites, just as a personal thing, but it doesn’t look bad here. 

Again, this is just a nit pick, but I feel like the stars/sequins on the skirt would look a little better if you alternated between small 1px dots and crosses or 2px dots, if that makes sense. Here’s some refs to show what I mean

I’ve been really into spriting recently and this is my first time doing it,,,feel free to critique ^^

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These are super cute! I really like them omg,,

The hair especially looks amazing, and the highlights look perfect.