For the director’s cut ask: A section of She is a star destined to shine you want to talk about? :3
(Also sorry if I just send this ask 2 days later after you reblogged)
i just realised i don't know how to really do this ask game, i just reblogged it cuz i liked the concept
Anyway, I wanted requested scenes since season 1 was, really, just build-up for the real plot of seasons 2 & 3 (and I'm only one chapter into the season 2 events).
Because of that, I chose a scene of a future chapter (not the next one, though) and yes, it's the one I made a text post about it being stuck in my head. spoilers, lmao
I just wanted to write it down, so it's in present tense and there's a few "something something blablabla"s in there. Also, I normally use my notes app, but I transferred this to Word for it to fit.
Violetta got the YouMix solo deal, following the show. However, I’ve combined the YouMix plot-lines from seasons 1 & 2, since I couldn’t fit it for the story I had in season 1. I do a lot of this in the fic where I rearrange certain events (like motocross).
Yep, angst. You know me. Priscila puts a lot of pressure onto Ludmi (to win the contest and get the solo career) and she mentally and physically breaks down. She still doesn’t make her emotions public, but they’re so strong that she can’t argue for too long without doing just that. This all kind of highlights just how abusive Priscila is; Ludmi is absolutely scared of her and letting her down.
Naty tries to find Ludmi since she ran away, but Vilu also joins in. Violetta may not be perfect (roxy-), but she is still very nice throughout the show. She’s pretty lenient (is that the proper word?) on Ludmi even at some of her worst moments, so I wanted to include that and a little moment with her and Naty.
Speaking of Naty, she just wants to comfort her gf and make her happy. Okay, in all seriousness, she just wants Ludmila to be okay. She lies to Vilu about Ludmi not being in the room since she knows just how upset she must be and assures her that it’s not the end of the world.
There’s this back-and-forth between Ludmi and Naty. Nobody, not even Naty, knows how upset she is and how much Priscila would tell her off. Naty is very sweet and comforting to Ludmi, and although she doesn’t know how to handle the affection, Ludmila accepts the hug before the fire nation attacks... before she goes home and has to break the news to Priscila.
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For a much lighter scene (yes, two), I just want to point out the scene in my newest chapter where Fran and Vilu video chat. Yeah, I’m not pulling up a picture. Anyway, I like it since it’s a fairly simple scene, but still a useful one.
One, uhm, Franletta being cute.
Two, I like writing casual conversations between two people in this fic. Sometimes dialogue can be too stiff and unnatural, but sometimes it can also seem like two friends are genuinely talking and bonding.
Three, it’s fun to fit in little but important things in there without it being a paragraph of its own (like Luca’s reason for leaving and them not hanging out in the restaurant being disclosed, and Federico moving in and being a YouMix star already).
