Their feedback (typed out):
Tipu on the side (for brand visibility) and for a definition.
Minimum barcode size with the right contrast (barcodeproduct.co.nz)
Bigger point size (by 0.5pt)
Gap in the information on the front.Ā
On the sleeve: homemade happiness lower (positioning)
TIP: printed content - paper face down.Ā
Adjust measurements of the inner box petals.Ā
Experiment with the beelines to beĀ āsketchyā and hand-drawn.
Put notches on both sides.Ā
Thicker gsm for the bottom section.Ā
About us at the bottom and definition/significance of the wordĀ ātipuā on the side.Ā
Bring in the blobby organic shapes?
Barcode on the bottom of the sleeve.Ā
Tipu is ... (but no eclipses) e.g.Ā ābees making your sweet peasā
IncreaseĀ āhomegrown happinessā and decreaseĀ āTipuā
Maori version of the text - definition/translation on one of the sides.Ā
Relate to endangered bees - Tipu donates to bees.Ā
Logo: koru symbolism or hands + plants in the same illustrative style.Ā
Put in more than one tomato on the poster.Ā
Advert: 3 plants that bleed off.
Advert: Hands with the packaging opened up with the same illustrative style -Ā āHow does your garden tipu?ā