Welcome to my last leg of blog tours for the #BuqoYA short story bundles! Today weâre tackling something off the fifth and last bundle, âPerfect Momentsâ â specifically, Sue Donymkoâs A Moment Like This.
(First totally unrelated note â I see what you did there, author. I do. And it is priceless. Basically â try saying the authorâs name out loud. Go on. Iâll be waiting.)
(Also, another note â it is four oâ clock in the morning upon the time of my writing this. Please forgive me for anything I might be getting wrong.)
He looked deep into her eyes, and her breath caught. âYou were starting to smell,â he said gravely. And just like that, the spell was broken as she laughed and whacked him on the arm. âI did not!â
It all started with a thunderstorm that never let up.
Kris Mercado and Noel Abad are two people from very different places (even literally â sheâs a Manila girl and heâs a Pasig boy) and very different places in society (Noelâs family is loaded, KrisâŚwell, not so much), and they probably wouldnât have met if it werenât for the fact that itâs flooding like crazy in Davao and thereâs only one room left unoccupied in the only hotel for miles.
Circumstances being what they are, they end up rooming together, and come out from the experience with more than they ever imagined.
If thereâs one thing I liked about these two it was that although itâs undeniable that they had immediate chemistry (physically, at least â both of them thought the other was attractive shortly after their first meeting), and got along with each other, they never really rushed into anything. They were comfortable with being friends, exchanging jokes and sassâŚuntil their time runs out and theyâre forced to admit to each other â and most of all, to their own selves â that yeah, thereâs something between them, something that could blossom into something more.
Also, Krisâ little bit about wanting to be someone who can take care of herself is something I can relate with on a personal level, honestly. Not to the extent where I also snap at people who try to care for me out of the blue, though, but I do understand how the feeling of being not in charge of your own fate does suck â itâs like youâre a puppet with your strings cut (damn, that was too poetic, wasnât it), and dealing with her problems towards that kind of situation is a really big thing about Kris as a character and as a person. In the end, itâs nice to see how she deals with that side of her and the side of Noel that just wants to let her be taken care of, once in a while.
This is something that extends to her viewpoint with traveling â like I said in my second review for the #BuqoYA fourth story bundle, itâs a natural urge for human beings to want to belong somewhere. She admits to that being a huge driving factor behind her travels, and I like how she manages to do it without, again, her family not being as wealthy as Noelâs family is â truly, when thereâs a will, thereâs a way, and I like how she manages to juggle that and her studies and guarding her familyâs collective back. With that work ethic, sheâs a girl whoâs got greater things waiting for her in the future, and I can only guess what her future has up next for her.
Itâs not really a perfect story â nothing really ever is â what with that one bit in the middle that gave me war flashbacks to college Gen Psych classes, and the sudden and yet utterly inevitable âex as conflictâ scene, but what I liked about this story was that it admits that life, like anything else, really isnât a fairytale. Kris and Noel had a lovely handful of days together, sure, but is this really what they want? Not just a sudden haze of cabin fever? Is thisâŚthing between them really something worth taking a risk for?
They find out the answer for themselves in the end, and, despite everything Iâve said and not said in the course of this review, A Moment Like This is definitely something worth reading.
(Excerpt of this story soon to follow, as well as, well, the blog tour banner itself, 'cuz Iâm currently posting this on tumblr mobile, which isnât letting me insert pictures here, among other things. Damn.)
Sue Donymko lives and works in Manila, Philippines. When not writing or working, or working some more, she eats, watches a lot of television, sings - much to the neighborsâ dismay - and reads until she falls asleep.
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Interested in getting this collection of short stories for yourself? Hereâs the purchase link to it on Buqo!
Also, thereâs a tour-wide giveaway going on, so feel free to peruse this link as you so choose!