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Y A Y ! also thank you 💕 💕 im so excited about this! welcome friend

so the monsterfucker part comes into it because Thor is a forest god that protects a village and the woods surrounding it, the latter being where he lives unseen for centuries. his presence is felt, and the villagers know^TM about him, but he only ever really appears to collect sacrifices that are left at the outer limits of the village.

for no other reason than me being a whore, his physical form is this. picture earthy colors maybe some antlers and him being like 10 feet tall whew

he reveals himself to you, little red riding reader, while you’re in the woods searching for important flowers to help the people of your village.

It’s based on this ask sent to lovely cee ( @spacelabrathor )

beep boop I add some actual plot and connect some dots and they end up taking a dip in the stream to escape the swelter of the day and lying in the grass together.

after the dip, he indulges your sweet curiosity and opens up to you, letting you languidly stroke his huuuuge cock because that’s all you could really do, and there is a long while of lying together, a strange transaction of need and your pious heart and soul war with wanting to please your god and also not wanting to ask or take too much

the groans that rumble from him are deep and after a while of letting you have your fun, he pleases you too but I must withhold the important details 😈

he’s been alive thousands of years, as long as the old woods, protected the village for centuries, and hey forest gods need their pleasures and intimacy too! He finds himself intrigued by you, pure hearted maiden. you’re soft, selfless, unafraid.

the years are ritual and slow, and for a long while, giving protection and fertile harvest has been fufilling. food sacrifices were enough.

So I knew you were gunna send this *smirk*  Okay, so the fic was inspired by wonderful writers such as yourself, @nsfwsebbie and @harryspet because you all write ddlg stuff!!! :D And also, for 2020 i decided to set a goal to get one fic published a month and while I did already publish something for May, i thought it would be cool to publish something else, in between may a nd june. 

And originally thiss fic was going to be darker. I had toyed with the idea of bucky kidnapping a girl from a club or maybe having the girl be someone he had kidnapped and essentially stockholmed but in the end i went just dark mood than actual dark (maybe i should call it dark lite???)  But anyways, so when it comes to ddlg, i am a little and i’m also A MASSIVE BRAT. like....omg ask any of y dom friends. i’m a sassy little shit and a masochist to boot.  so i’m the Royal Highness of brattiness. And i loved the idea of bucky punishing his bratty little princess (cough me cough) BUT one thing people never really think about in bdsm fanfic and erotica is the softer, caring side. And i def think bucky would take every precaution. And a conversation with a friend led me to want to add in the bit on safewords and limits and ESPECIALLY the aftercare after the punishment One thing I did kinda struggle with this is second person pov. I don’t write it almost ever but it seems to be the flavour of choice for bucky fics. However, i had a bunch of people read it before publishing it and they all said it flowed really naturally. I did have one person complain that they thought the talking about curves added in too much detail but idk. i’ve read plenty of first person POV fics that describe “your small frame” and “your skinny waist?” so i mean

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answered it here but I’ll just say five more adsja asoiaf series, anne of green gables, death on the nile, the book thief, momo 

omg thank u so much!! tbh i just write dialogue like how I have conversations. I say it out loud and if it flows like how I would have the conversation in real life then I keep it, and if it doesn’t i change it. dialogue is something that’s always come easy to me so im sorry i dont have very helpful tips! what helped me the most was saying it out loud. i learnt a lot of my dialogue skills from doing drama because when we would create our own productions, one of the main problems we have was we’d write a script but when we performed it the dialogue was always so unnatural. improvisation helped us streamline the dialogue and make it into a realistic conversation, with things people really say because we were just responding off the cuff to each other. i try to take that same idea with my writing. if i say it out loud and it sounds clunky i improvise different ways to get the same message across, as if i was having the conversation with my friends. that way it reads like an actual conversation and not an improvisation dump between quotation marks. 

things i try to do to create a more natural feel to my dialogue (these aren’t hard and fast rules, this is just some things i follow when i write that might be helpful!):

use colloquialisms and improper spelling - no one speaks in perfect english so it makes a lot more sense to write dialogue imperfectly than exact grammar and punctuation

break up dialogue with action. body language says just as much in real life as people’s words do, and its the same with writing. it also keeps your dialogue from getting super wordy and long winded

in that same way, keep your dialogue short. back and forth repartee is what keeps a real life conversation flowing, and its the same in writing. if people are speaking to each other in paragraphs of speech then no one is going to bother keeping up, least of all the people having this supposed conversation

dialogue should be driving something - plot, character development, a change in relationship between characters, a conflict, etc. i tend to use dialogue only when i need something to change. if im trying to describe something happening now then i wont use a conversation to do that. unnecessary, fluffy dialogue thats just filling up space is the biggest way to ruin the flow of your work in my opinion haha

HEAVILY CHARACTERISE YOUR DIALOGUE! what a character is saying should reveal so much about their character. do they speak in short, blunt sentences? do they speak in run-on, rambly sentences? do they um and ah a lot, do they cut themselves off to start a new thought but never finish any of them, do they carefully chose each word before they say it? do they speak a lot or not at all? do they immediately jump on the defence in a conflict, do they try and keep the peace, are they the ones instigating the conflict, do they try to use humour to diffuse the situation, do they stay out of it entirely? theres so much to reveal about who a character is with a few short lines of dialogue. 

i also like to use a character’s first lines to encapsulate who they are as a character. like in comic books, the first panel of a character is very indicative of their main character traits - it gives you a snapshot of who they are. i try to do the same with my dialogue. the first line they say to someone is usually very typical of them and gives you a quick summary of who they are. but that’s just me as a person haha thats not like a rule or anything, i just find it helps with establishing my characters

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Nah | haven’t seen yet | didn’t like/gave up | like it | love it | highly recommend.

a reason why: I really liked the music and the story had a lot more to it (even if I didn’t agree with 100% of the choices... why was Elsa the fifth spirit?? There was already water... and Bruni was cute but that’s all?? And ugh idk.. Samantha should have been the fifth spirit 😂)