i understand all the reasoning u are giving but where is y/n confronting jake???? girl like where?? if i were her i would atleast ask and confront him and ask if they done more but no none of this was mentioned and we are going straight to getting back together??!! (ik know they did not break up) why are u beating around the bush huh?? ask him about it you have proof i think it does not make sense and im just stating my opinion( if u dont want it its okay) but im not spreading any hate towards you or im not trying to. people are gonna comment when u are writing a story there are gonna be good comments and bad comments(some are unreasonable hate and some are just opinions) .im just trying get my point across i hope u understand
do u want me to post the planning and all the chapters that I wrote? Is that what u want? Cuz I will genuinely if u want me to. it’s chapter seven for fucking Pete’s sake. It’s chapter seven. There’s sixteen chapters. I’m telling this again there’s sixteen chapters I’ll repeat it again there’s sixteen chapters. I just finished my exams and the first thing I thought of was to post a chapter for this smau. Can’t u literally wait for a week until ts ends because do u genuinely think im that much of a shitty fucking writer to not adress the situations of jake cheating???? Why tf do u think I put that in the entire story just to ignore it a couple chapters later??? Dear God im telling u again this is chapter seven. What the fuck do u think the other chapters are for, filler???? Random fluff???? obviously not this isn’t even the climax of the smau. I’m not condoning cheating, im not agreeing with the people calling yn a bird and obviously im not even done with the fucking smau. Chapter seven is not the end of the smau. You would know that if u actually had waited until tmrw cuz the first thing I was gna do in the morning was make the fucking chapter. hope ur happy for shitting on a teenager for making a realistic smaus that don’t fit ur standards
