Beta reader?
Hello.
I'm new to Stranger Things and in search of a beta reader for this fandom. I've got a time travel!AU wip at 7k and here's a snippet of my writing for you to decide if I'm worth your time!
Note this story contains a sizable garnish of Harringrove 👍
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“So!” Billy clapped his hands together and Max crossed her arms for effect, “Who's Will?”
All five of the nerds stared at him. Or, well, the nerd in the bandana was staring at Max, which, creepy. And the girl was actually staring at a bird on one of the fountains.
But the extra skinny one, shrimpy and curly looked properly afraid.
“I’m Will,” shrimpy said, before getting shoved aside by the loud, curly-top one.
“I’m Will,” he said, dramatically holding a hand to his chest. He was in a damn periodic table shirt. It made Billy’s eyes feel pain.
“Dustin!” bandana said, shoving curly--Dustin--in the shoulder.
“Oh, thanks,” Dustin drawled, “whoever it is you are. Now he knows I’m not Will!”
“He already knows Will’s Will,” bandana continued, waving his arms at the tiny guy. The kid looked like a strong breeze would send him over.
“Because you just told him!” Dustin complained, reaching over and flicking his friend--possibly(?) Didn’t exactly look like it to Billy--between the eyes and right under the camo headpiece he must’ve thought was very cool.
“It’s not like anybody else looks like a Will.”
“Will is a very generic name. It could literally be any of us.”
“One of us is a girl!”
“Willamina is a name!”
Billy pinched the bridge of his nose.
“‘Kay I’m bored,” Billy grabbed the most-probably-Will-one by his dumb red polo-collar and hauled him over to a small set up of benched at the center of the hallway? Billy had literally not been to a mall since he was like… seven. He had no idea what the fuck anything was called. Other then closed and rundown like most places like this were in 2018.
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