#antisjm

Anyway things I think would be better for tog:

•No rowan and aelin it seemed forced and to quick plus rowan told aelin to k***herself and hit her or said something aboat going to do it

•if there had to be romance aelin and fenrys would work only if there had to be romance though I see them more as friends

•I would have aelin actually k*** people

•aelin should be in her late 20s because she can't be that skilled and only be 19

•chaol and yerne should not be married that quick

•events of tower of dawn should be longer I felt we missed out on a lot of culture and characters

•chaol should be older than aelin and dorian like come on he is captain of the guards he has to be experienced because he is in charge of people and is also probably training them aswell

•lorcan and elite they have a nice relationship but why is lorcan so tall and elite so small to me elite would look like a child standing next to lorcan like have elide taller at least around 5,6 5,7

•have the group struggle defeating maeve and erwan because it seemed to quick and easy for them and those 2 are over thousands of years old like what do you mean 19 year olds helped out by 300 year olds be ye guys .Maeve brainwashed an entire city of fae for 3000 years.

•make dorians father more cruel I want to hate him not forget aboat him

•nehimah(don't if I spelled her name correctly) didn't have to die like that if she had to die she should have died later like there were other ways to make aelin motivated

•the 13 dint all have to die like what the he'll sjm some of them could be badly injured or burned or something

•aelin running through the fae war camp in chains like girl your not that gast to out run fae males/men or whatever they call themselves. It was an emotional sence for the characters though

It’s not hard to make a character who has done bad things but is regretful of them, tries harder to not be like that from before, but maybe can’t forget his past. SJM has done this. But it’s also not hard to make a character that is just overwhelmingly problematic and is also pretty psychologically/socially manipulative. SJM has done that. Both are potentially interesting. 

I just don’t know where Rhys falls... because he’s not a main pov, but he’s treated like the main character. So we get all of his actions and none of the internal rationalization. It’s difficult then to decide if he’s good or not, and the books themselves almost make you choose, because there’s no middle ground. It’s like if you do like this character, you’re fine, you can like him. If you like this other character, you probably hate this guy. There’s just not a consistent moral grayness of being sometimes good and maybe sometimes bad and maybe being neutral at times and then also having that moral grayness reflected across many povs/characters. 

Whatever he is, I don’t care. I’d just rather he’d not be annoying... and the mind games sjm plays with her readers because there’s a lack of clear goal is annoying tbh. Like Rhys being somewhat civil and showing some emotional understanding towards Tamlin doesn’t make sense when he doesn’t show that for Feyre’s own sister.... like come on... how does that make sense? At the very least you should be affording more patience to your SO’s sister who your SO loves and defends than someone you know has emotionally ab*sed your SO and quite recently. 

Gather round, and listen well please. I just wanna ask and inform y’all.

*Deep inhale*

Why you gonna have the MC/ OC be RELATED to Rhysand but then also say that they’re mated to Azriel or Cassian??? By default they’re the MC/ OC’s UNCLES. UNCLES BRUH. Come on now. And don’t give me that bullshit about: “wELl tHEY aRen’T ACtUalLY rElaTEd!” Nah man you get that shit outta here. Rhysand, Cassian, and Azriel grew up together and see each other as family and as brothers. Therefore, any kids they have, they will be the uncles.