Hi! I'm that anon that complimented your characterization like, yesterday I think?
I'm not planning on spamming you, this is the last time I swear, but I made you a poem! ^_^ I'm not much of a writer, but your Sins of the Father story inspired me to write a poem based off of it. So here it is!
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The burden of old mistakes is not something you chose to bear,
Yet somehow their heavy shadow seems to linger everywhere.
Through blood and shadow, pain and plight,
You search for truth in the endless night.
The past is a wound that refuses to close, no matter how much time has passed,
A legacy of sorrow and brokenness that was never truly built to last.
A father’s faults, a hunter’s guilt,
A fragile world on which they’re built.
You walk where silence and danger meet,
With fear like stone beneath your feet.
A ruined path, a broken name,
And every choice is touched by blame.
The dark may wear a trusted face when it comes to stand so near,
And grief may poison love and grace until they vanish into fear.
It twists what is gentle, and leaves the world unclear,
Until even hope begins to disappear.
Yet in your chest, though hope is faint and difficult to hold,
There still remains a stubborn strength that refuses to grow cold.
For though you break and though you bleed,
You will not let the darkness feed.
The ghosts beside you do not sleep, and they will not drift away,
They guard the soul you struggle to keep, no matter what the shadows say.
Their voices steady, fierce, and true,
Remind you what you still must do.
So let the past roar cold and loud, and let sorrow gather like a cloud,
You will stand through all that’s torn, and carry on what you were born.
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Also, please don't feel like you have to respond! I just want to show support is my own little way, so I hope you enjoyed!
Anon, extremely seriously, I am in tears right now. I am going to print this poem out and hug it. or something, I don't know yet. But oh my god.
Thank you. I know I just said this in the other post lol, but seriously, thank you, I love it.
I have a small request about this poem. And you are free to say no if it makes you uncomfortable.
I'm working on formatting Sins so I can try to book bind it and I would like to ask if it's okay to use this poem on the dedication page. It isn't something I'm going to sell, so the only people who will see that version of the fic is me and a few close friends who are interested in binding the fic too, but if you're all right with this, may I use the poem there?
Even if not, thank you so much for this. I'm really not kidding about tearing up, this means so much and I'm really touched that Sins inspired this 💖
Also you never have to apologise for sending these messages - I enjoy each adn every one I get - it just took me a while to put my brain into order and sort out how to reply <3