Ignore if you don't want critic
The only thing that I noticed in the beach Pic was one of Milo's legs, I think, should be turned. He's facing Varus but both legs are facing Jace.
Maybe add Varus's foot under Renn's elbow?
Do with what you wish, still a pretty picture
I dont mind feed back at all no worries <3<3 I agree with you 100% and honestly.......and you're being very kind with your critique bc I can pick MORE things that I think needs fixing Mylo's pose is generally wrong and his arm are too long ? I guess I would like to fix the shading on Renn's neck bc it's blending with the shading of his face and making his face look too long I also think Renn's pose needs fixing too oh yeah and .........I actually gave up on Varus's legs/feet I didn't even tryyyyy they just dont exist Jace is barely even in the picture just like my dad AND THERE'S SO MUCH MORE TT0TT BUTTTTTTT I think I'm done trying to fix this one...I wasted so much time trying to fix this when I could've done more art and I think my biggest mistake was when I first sketched this and thought " hmmm I hate this " is that I didn't discard it and start over
so I'm just gonna move on from this drawing and work on other things













