who is that? turn off that camera now.

Bonus

1. Slow down at emotionally important moments.

Big emotions need space to land. If a scene feels rushed, pause the plot briefly to show how the moment affects the character.

2. Add reactions, not explanations.

Instead of explaining what a character feels, show it through physical responses, hesitation, or small actions that reveal emotion naturally.

3. Ground every scene in the senses.

If a scene feels thin, add one or two sensory details—sound, texture, smell, or temperature—to make the moment feel lived-in.

4. Let thoughts interrupt action.

A line of internal thought can deepen a scene without slowing it too much. Thoughts show stakes, fear, longing, or conflict beneath the action.

5. Expand consequences, not events.

You don’t need more things to happen—you need to show what matters. Focus on how events change relationships, decisions, or self-perception.

6. Strengthen setting where emotion peaks.

The environment should echo or contrast the emotion of the scene. Setting is not decoration—it’s emotional reinforcement.

7. Add specific details instead of general ones.

Underwriting often relies on vague language. Swap “they argued” for one sharp line of dialogue or a specific breaking point.

8. Let dialogue breathe.

Short dialogue exchanges without pauses can feel flat. Add beats—silence, gestures, interruptions—to give the conversation weight.

9. Show transitions between scenes.

If scenes jump too quickly, readers feel disoriented. A brief transition helps establish time, mood, and emotional continuity.

10. Clarify stakes early in the scene.

If readers don’t know what can be lost, scenes feel empty. Make sure the character wants something specific and fears losing it.

11. Use the “what are they feeling right now?” check.

After each major beat, ask what emotion is dominant in that moment. If it’s missing on the page, the scene is likely underwritten.

12. Expand scenes that feel “too clean.”

Newsflash; It was never intended to be a nostalgia piece. It’s a project that came from a very old script that never adjusted for modern standards, aside from getting more polished animation. The reason why it “handles” cliches from the 2000’s “so well” is because it was actually developed from that era. It’s not nostalgia, it’s just outdated.

In fact, calling Gameoverse a “nostalgia piece” is an insult to actual nostalgia pieces. Wanna see some REAL nostalgia pieces?

Nebula & Quasar: An upcoming 2000’s styled indie game, that is currently being advertised as fake lost media.

(Content warning- Bird miscarriage in Nebula & Quasar (PC) Opening Cutscene, jumpscare in the Nightfall OST, and some ad based videos contain flashing lights.)

Lacey’s Flash Games Series: A horror ARG that explores a fictional, obscure defunct flash games site for girls, with a horrifying secret hidden within.

(Content warning: Frightening imagery, gore, body horror, animal abuse, implied child sex abuse)

Murphy & Mitzi: An animated short series, following the misadventures of a cat boy and girl squirrel, in what looks to be a Cartoon Network series from the millennium.

(Content: None. It’s cute, wacky, and very nostalgic.)

I've release my first album called Directionless Emotions it has five tracks. tgirl lesbian sex, performative allyship, O V E R R E A C T I N G, missing, and on the way out.

It seems that loving Doctor Sawyer comes at a price… Very high price, hahaha, oh my god, that price.

This entire situation feels like Glitch just ran headfirst into a situation without fully understanding what they were getting themselves into. Now they're scrambling to figure out how to find a satisfying solution.

Yes he is probably very strong but he also is huge.

Now they just lie there chained up being eaten as they eat.

I've seen peoplep propose he was used as garbage disposal. If not that it was probabbly for a scientific thing XD But you're right, it's weird.

"When Bron eats, we all eat." spoken with shaking reverence lives rent free in my head.

These are all children. Maybe the Bron kid and the outimal kids even knew eachother in playcare.

And now Bron is some deity for them, somehow.