@joeyandy :3 i tried to take some of your advice, structure wise-
Scratching and sniffing out the weak
As the depths of the ocean burst
Scattering a hurricane of blood thirst
As it knives, as it hurts, as it lets fly
Its silver array of bullets from the sky
They crash down, leaving no space,
No stopping the pace of the guns, a race
That wraps itself around your soul.
Looking up, a smile greets you-
the moment passes, and your luggage straps itself softly on your shoulder, where it belongs.
And suddenly, the birds start singing.
You notice the garden, in all its beauty.
The children, rejoicing over a singular packet of skittles- the small kind that's not meant for sharing, but you see them part it equally.
You notice the the flowers that lay, resting
On a memorial bench, their ivory-white glow,
reflecting the rays of the sun. The petals request your company, and you sit.
Then, with the whistles of the wind,
The smooth strokes of the grass,
The sweet songs of the ocean's waves,
quieter, softer, smaller, but still there.
Orbiting your trace, in the smiles of people's face, the love in a warm in-brace.