Observing Humanity

I finally was able to finish my re-reading, re-editing, my cursing and groaning, and have put all those stories into REAL BOOKS. 

If you like to have a copy please follow this link for more information:

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DEADLINE is: 14. February 2016 (Valentinesday, 9pm GMT +1)

hey everyone - the rewrites of but we’re so happy are up and completed! not too much has changed in part one, but a lot of details have been added/altered that are important for later! part 2 is radically different with an added 12k words, so i’ll appreciate any/all feedback! thank you!! 

part one: “I knew them both,” Jack says quietly. “I watched them fall in love. I watched them change.” Their knees touch, and her hand is on his thigh, and he’s smiling at her like she’s the sole reason he’s alive; Rory pictures the sun and the earth, orbiting. [from the outside looking in. the song repeats, I miss you, I miss you, I miss you, haunting him. so, maybe he’ll never know. 10k words]

As mention by someone else, I also love this series the first time around, so I was ecstatic when you added something extra. For part one, I really enjoy the extra details in Rory’s observation into Twelve/Clara’s relationship; and also the inclusion of Martha’s part into their relationship was a really nice touch in connecting part one and part two of the series (among the other connections of course :) ).

And for part 2. I was debating which versions I like more, but the problem is I love them both!!! The previous one got this innocent air about it that I don’t think I am able to describe in words no matter how I try; I don’t think I would do it justice to be honest in describing how pure that version feels. This current version still embraces the innocence of the original, but yet it makes my heart ache more than the original. Don’t get me wrong, I giggled at their cute banters, but my heart ache for them when they’re trying to not define their relationship. I guess I just want them to be happy :) And that’s what is amazing about your writing. While we as readers just want the happy ending, you manage to take the time to flesh out the hardships and difficulties of getting to that happy ending and thus tugging our heartstrings along the way using nothing but just your mastery of the English language.

hey everyone - the rewrites of but we’re so happy are up and completed! not too much has changed in part one, but a lot of details have been added/altered that are important for later! part 2 is radically different with an added 12k words, so i’ll appreciate any/all feedback! thank you!! 

part one: “I knew them both,” Jack says quietly. “I watched them fall in love. I watched them change.” Their knees touch, and her hand is on his thigh, and he’s smiling at her like she’s the sole reason he’s alive; Rory pictures the sun and the earth, orbiting. [from the outside looking in. the song repeats, I miss you, I miss you, I miss you, haunting him. so, maybe he’ll never know. 10k words]

As mention by someone else, I also love this series the first time around, so I was ecstatic when you added something extra. For part one, I really enjoy the extra details in Rory’s observation into Twelve/Clara’s relationship; and also the inclusion of Martha’s part into their relationship was a really nice touch in connecting part one and part two of the series (among the other connections of course :) ).

And for part 2. I was debating which versions I like more, but the problem is I love them both!!! The previous one got this innocent air about it that I don’t think I am able to describe in words no matter how I try; I don’t think I would do it justice to be honest in describing how pure that version feels. This current version still embraces the innocence of the original, but yet it makes my heart ache more than the original. Don’t get me wrong, I giggled at their cute banters, but my heart ache for them when they’re trying to not define their relationship. I guess I just want them to be happy :) And that’s what is amazing about your writing. While we as readers just want the happy ending, you manage to take the time to flesh out the hardships and difficulties of getting to that happy ending and thus tugging our heartstrings along the way using nothing but just your mastery of the English language.

If you want me to draw something, please don’t phrase it in the form of a demand. I find it extremely off-putting to be put in the spotlight on posts and reblogs, and while I am flattered you really want me to do it, I don’t much care for the attitude that seems to come with it.

I have a day job so therefore all my art is done in my free time, and I am not paid to do anything unless it’s commissioned of me, so generally I don’t draw requests because I’m usually occupied with something else I’m doing.

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