Poppy Red

5 links to the kindle version (or you can just type the title below to your countries Amazon site!):

that moan like a saxophone

You don’t need kindle to download. They have a free app for your phone!

You can also easily buy the kindle version on the America Amazon link.

American - $1.00:

https://www.amazon.com/that-moan-like-saxophone-English-ebook/dp/B01NBP6JL3/ref=la_B078LKHLPW_1_1_twi_kin_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1522216094&sr=1-1

Europe - £ 0.99:

https://www.amazon.co.uk/that-moan-like-saxophone-thompson-ebook/dp/B01NBP6JL3/ref=sr_1_cc_1?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1522268438&sr=1-1-catcorr&keywords=that+moan+like+a+saxophone

France - £ 0.99:

https://www.amazon.fr/that-moan-like-saxophone-English-ebook/dp/B01NBP6JL3/ref=la_B078LKHLPW_1_1_twi_kin_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1522216094&sr=1-1

India - 64.00 rupees

https://www.amazon.in/that-moan-like-saxophone-English-ebook/dp/B01NBP6JL3/ref=la_B078LKHLPW_1_1_twi_kin_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1522216094&sr=1-1

Australia - $1.30

keeping these breaths inside me makes watching her glitter fly away that much more manageable. these words hide from her pores causing her to scale. I refuse to quench her thirst of syllables for if I let her drink me I too will evaporate into her tinge. these days tick slow, leaving me groggy, untouched & tamed. flowing past me like a midnight Mardi-Grass. The only way to stay with this girl is to throw beads around her neck. She won’t flash me though, as she knows all too well what things brings. It would cause a flight up to the stars & what goes up must come down & we have no chute. Loving her fragrance smelling the perfume dreched across her neck I am intoxicated. Shortly after I part ways as she keeps her stench, freedom begins its call. doormats stay clean because the fall only falls when I lose my heart the winter looms and summertime is to no-avail, seasons aren’t quite in order but that honestly doesn’t matter I just know the bitter cold when I feel it. she is leaving right infront of me, my head spins causing me to fall tomorrow arrives and this is where I learn that I wake up alone.

@words-from-yonder

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Review: Though, I love your use of descriptive lines and potent imagery, watch your spelling and punctuation as it will help this piece flow a little easier. Otherwise, lovely job. Keep on writing <3

our legs are conversing

tapping out morse

down the cobbled history

of one last attempt

at together

my fingers twitch

in the sleeve of air

where our ghost hands

once clasped

the reverie

of untarnished metal

a little star

seesawed an arc

to delineate

where two contours

were a merging

pointillism

loneliness measured

in an arms breadth

of walking

in the exact

same direction