Hey, please read what I wrote and help me make it sound less artificial when translated into English. I translated it to ChatGPT but I wrote it myself because I couldn't fully trust the translation, but I can't fully trust GPT to
I tried to edit it a bit, but I don't know how well I managed it. Also, this is my first attempt at writing a proper fanfiction, so please be understanding. I am open to constructive criticism.
Kai knew he wasnโt a good person. Of course he knew.
He had done too many unethical things in his lifeโฆ taken lives he had no right to take.
People didnโt know his sins.
They saw him as the โRed Ninja.โ
Could someone who had taken lives ever be a hero?
He didnโt know anything.
And it was driving him insane.
He didnโt even know how much Nya knewโฆ
Back when she was little, she used to ask him questions all the time.
And Kai always gave vague answers, tried to brush her off, make her stop asking.
But his sister was smart.
Smarter than him, even back then.
He knew she suspected thingsโฆ
He knew she couldnโt fully piece it togetherโฆ
But the problem wasโwhat did she know?
Maybe it didnโt matter anymore.
Too much time had passed.
Becoming ninjas probably helped her forget.
The only thing Kai could do nowโฆ was hope she never remembered.
Why couldnโt things just stay the way they were?
He needed the money, and he wasnโt going to let his sister starve.
He had promised his mother he would take care of her, right?
When he made that promiseโฆ he hadnโt thought they would leave them.
All he did was play in the backyard with his sisterโฆ
And then they never saw them again.
Had they done it on purpose?
Their parents used to leave sometimes, sureโฆ
But they always said something.
But this timeโฆ even after tearing the whole house apartโฆ
Then why didnโt they call out to them?
Maybe he should just stop thinking.
Maybe he should just get drunk.
How could he not think? How could he not see?How could he not hear?
Those were the most basic things.
If he couldnโt even do thatโฆ then what kind of โheroโ was he?
How was he supposed to leave the monastery like this?
But that had beenโฆ accidental.
Jay knowing was mutual, in a way.
Yeahโฆ Kai hadnโt expected that.
But neither of them explained how or why.
They justโฆ went to each other when they needed it.
Or one did, while the other stayed.
They never talked about it out loud.
โฆMaybe they had talked about it while drunk?
Cole was more his fault, though.
He had been drunkโฆ somehow managed to make it back to his room at the monastery.
He didnโt think he was capable of being quiet in that state anyway.
How he hadnโt woken everyone up was still a mystery.
But at least it had been Cole who found him.
God, he couldnโt let them see him like that.
Nya wouldโve bombarded him with questionsโฆ
And in that state, he wouldnโt have been able to handle it.
Not her questions. Not her passive-aggressive tone.
If Lloyd saw him like that?
Of course heโd be disappointed.
What would it feel like to see your โheroโ like that?
Lloyd was trying so hardโ
to be the perfect Green Ninja,
his brother was just a hopeless mess?
Thatโs why he was glad it had been Cole.
Cole had dragged him into the showerโฆ
The next morning, Cole didnโt say much. But after that dayโฆ
every time Kai came back drunk Cole somehow found him.
And he didnโt want to think about it.
Why did it hurt so muchโฆ?
โฆMaybe he should sleep.
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