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So pierre, learning to accept other religions is one of the steps to make the world a better place. although you could have delved deeper into this issue. For example you could have given more examples relating to this issue or an analysis using your opinion. You could have also addressed other issues that affects the peace in the world. So next time consider using those suggestions while you're in the process of another assignment similar to this. I am not saying your work was not good, but I 'm just saying that you could have done better.

I find your work as inspiring to me as Jacob's, and I really praised his work. Anyway you are right about how we humans feel the need to protect and that is one of the reasons we have these governments and laws and everything. But something that I really enjoyed was when you delved deep into the concept of humans feeling empathy for others by using actual scientific research to justify your answer. Plus I really liked it how you went the extra mile by posting a macklemore rap to express your opinion.

You have a really beautiful piece of work. I really appreciated your efforts to both give your opinions and express it in a creative and imaginative way. I also really enjoyed the part where you gave the example where man needs government because they are not angels. I completely agree with you on that subject, because that is also one thing I was trying to explain on my project. So overall your project was great and inspiring, it is not something you ordinarily see.