The potato blog

 [▼]→ Jealous version - [▽]→ Happy version -  [ASMR] [DARK]→ Threesome + [Longer and shorter versions]

Ayato: [▼] - [ASMR] -  [LONGER AND SHORTER VERSIONS] [FUFFLY VERSION]

Laito: [▽] - [LONGER AND SHORTER VERSIONS]

Kanato:  [▼] - [SHORTER VERSION]

Shu:  [▼] - [▽] - [ASMR] [DARK - With Kou] - [LONGER AND SHORTER VERSIONS]

Reiji: [▼] - [ASMR] - [SHORTER VERSION]

Subaru: [▽] - [ASMR] -  [LONGER VERSION]

Kanato:  [▼] - [SHORTER VERSION]

Ruki: [▼] - [ASMR] - [LONGER AND SHORTER VERSIONS]

Kou:  [▼] - [▽] -  [ASMR] - [SHORTER AND LONGER]

Yuma: [▽] - [LONGER 1 - 2] - [RUDE VERSION]

Azusa: [▽] - [NORMAL]

Shin:  [▼] - [▽] - [ASMR] - [RUDE AND LONGER VERSIONS]

Carla:  [▼] - [DOUBLE] - [NORMAL]

Kino: [LONGER VERSION]

10/18 Happy birthday shu

Do an outline, whatever way works best. Get yourself out of the word soup and know where the story is headed.

Conflicts and obstacles. Hurt the protagonist, put things in their way, this keeps the story interesting. An easy journey makes the story boring and boring is hard to write.

Change the POV. Sometimes all it takes to untangle a knotted story is to look at it through different eyes, be it through the sidekick, the antagonist, a minor character, whatever.

Know the characters. You can’t write a story if the characters are strangers to you. Know their likes, dislikes, fears, and most importantly, their motivation. This makes the path clearer.

Fill in holes. Writing doesn’t have to be linear; you can always go back and fill in plotholes, and add content and context.

Have flashbacks, hallucinations, dream sequences or foreshadowing events. These stir the story up, deviations from the expected course add a feeling of urgency and uncertainty to the narrative.

Introduce a new mystery. If there’s something that just doesn’t add up, a big question mark, the story becomes more compelling. Beware: this can also cause you to sink further into the mire.

Take something from your protagonist. A weapon, asset, ally or loved one. Force him to operate without it, it can reinvigorate a stale story.

Twists and betrayal. Maybe someone isn’t who they say they are or the protagonist is betrayed by someone he thought he could trust. This can shake the story up and get it rolling again.

Secrets. If someone has a deep, dark secret that they’re forced to lie about, it’s a good way to stir up some fresh conflict. New lies to cover up the old ones, the secret being revealed, and all the resulting chaos.

Kill someone. Make a character death that is productive to the plot, but not “just because”. If done well, it affects all the characters, stirs up the story and gets it moving.

Ill-advised character actions. Tension is created when a character we love does something we hate. Identify the thing the readers don’t want to happen, then engineer it so it happens worse than they imagined.

Create cliff-hangers. Keep the readers’ attention by putting the characters into new problems and make them wait for you to write your way out of it. This challenge can really bring out your creativity.

Raise the stakes. Make the consequences of failure worse, make the journey harder. Suddenly the protagonist’s goal is more than he expected, or he has to make an important choice.

Make the hero active. You can’t always wait for external influences on the characters, sometimes you have to make the hero take actions himself. Not necessarily to be successful, but active and complicit in the narrative.

Different threat levels. Make the conflicts on a physical level (“I’m about to be killed by a demon”), an emotional level (“But that demon was my true love”) and a philosophical level (“If I’m forced to kill my true love before they kill me, how can love ever succeed in the face of evil?”).

Figure out an ending. If you know where the story is going to end, it helps get the ball rolling towards that end, even if it’s not the same ending that you actually end up writing.

What if? What if the hero kills the antagonist now, gets captured, or goes insane? When you write down different questions like these, the answer to how to continue the story will present itself.

Ayato: “A-Ayato…more…” You moaned softly, you had toys that you used whenever Ayato wasn’t around to pleasure you right when you wanted.

“Hm?” Ayato had heard you whimpers ad moans from afar, so he walked down the hallways and opened the door slowly, “More of what? I’m not eve-.” Ayato’s eyes widened as he saw you spread out on your bed with a toy shoved inside you. He watched you shoot up, he smiled at you frightened look.

“Well, pancake was very desperate to have me inside her.” He walked over to the bed and you felt your heart drop to your stomach.

“N-No..I mean, yes but-!” You wanted to think of a way to keep Ayato from catching on, but he already knew. You were cut off when he slammed your arms above your head“A-Ayato!” You squirmed, but he just tightened his grip.

“Stay still.” He frowned and pushed his knee up to push the toy further inside you. He smiled as you began to moan and beg for him to stop, “Does it hurt…?” He laughed and pushed harder until he felt ready himself, yanking it out and beginning to take off his own pants. He nudged your legs apart with a wicked grin, “You want more? I’ll give you more.” (WHOA-)

Reiji: As a ’lady’ (That’s how Reiji always refered to you as) you were NOT supposed to touch yourself in such a place, but you couldn’t take it anymore! Reiji sexually starved you to the brink of insanity! You decided enough was enough. Being sneaky, you slipped into your room and made sure that your door was locked before slipping  your hand inside your skirt and beginning to pleasure yourself. It felt wonderful being able to receive some type of pleasure for once, instead of feeling like you  weren’t ever allowed to have sex or pleasure in your life ever. The closer you got the edge, the louder your voice became. “Reiji…R-Reiji!” You arched as you felt  yourself about to reach sweet relief, but a voice stopped you.

“What on Earth are you doing, s/o?” Your eyes shot open to see Reiji standing at the foot of your bed  with a frown. You gulped. “You know I told you to not do what you’re doing right now, don’t you?” He walked over to the side of your bed and crossed his arms with a sigh, “I guess I need to properly punish you for this. You better be ready to take full responsibility for what you’ve done.”

Laito: Laito had been away lately without a real reason, and you were getting very lonely. You and Laito were very sexually active, and not very afraid to be out there about  it. Kanato, Ayato, Reiji, Shu, and Subaru had gotten their fair share of moaning and groaning waking them up in the night when you and Laito got into it. But tonight,  you thought you were going to die! You couldn’t figure out why tonight of all nights you body wanted something inside of it fast. You ran up to yours and Laito’s room since the two of you shared a room. You frantically yanked open the dresser drawer and smiled, there it was. Laito always had toys handy, always. You didn’t waste  anytime stripping your clothes off and beginning to push it inside you. Vibrations pulsed through your whole body, your toes curled and you grabbed the sheets. “Laito! Yeah…L-Laito..harder.” You rolled your hips as if he was there, but something stopped you.

“Oh my! You must of been so lonely.” You knew that voice, you grinned andshot up partly embarrassed,

“Laito!” You smiled as he brought you into his embrace. He had come back to you,

“I’m sorry it took so long, I had some things to handle. But I’m back now…” And you couldn’t be any happier, not just sexually happy…but just happy. (Awe!)

Kanato: Kanato never wanted to have sex, ever. EVER. It drove you up the wall and made you want to scream at him, but you knew if you did that he would kill you. So, once or twice a month you would sneak into your room and say that you felt ‘sick’ and pleasure yourself since nobody else would. I mean, Laito would but you really didn’t love Laito the way that you loved Kanato. You laid down on your bed and began to pleasure, you were too scared to keep toys around just in case someone were to come across them. “Kanato…” You groaned and twisted. You didn’t even get that far before you heard the bed creak and your eyes shot open to see Kanato sitting there, covering Teddy’s eyes. He tilted his head,

“Why are you doing that? If you needed me so badly, you should of just asked.” He sat Teddy aside and climbed on top of you. You blushed,

“Whenever we start to get…into it…you just turn me away.” You looked away, but then glanced back at him when he began to laugh.

“I only turn you away because I don’t want sex unless you want it.” He shrugged and leaned down, “know that I know you do want it, you better prepare yourself.”

Shu: Literally whenever you wanted to shave sex you just rode him. There wasn’t a time he didn’t hear you.

Subaru: You and Subaru were very shy about your sex life, so when he found you screaming his name with something shoved inside of you..he was shocked. He did give you what you wanted though. all night long.

R: Diabolik Lovers More Blood A: Bonus CD K: Personality Swap Incident; in the case of the triplets K: Wasn’t I saying…that that pudding was mine!? But even so…! Ayato, you’re so cruel!! Don’t mess with me! A: Oh my god…shut up!! Can’t you just make that gloomy glasses make pudding for you again!? Jeez! K: *sniffles* that’s not the point…! I…wanted…to eat the pudding…that’s in Ayato’s stomach right now…! A: What the hell am I supposed to do!? Shut up, stop crying! Will you be satisfied if I vomit it out for you? Would you!? (01:07) K: do you expect me to eat such thing…!? R: Mnn…, it feels like it’s peaceful as ever…don’t you think so too, Bitch-chan? Haha, to have children whining over a mere dessert, isn’t that like what you humans call ‘peaceful’? Besides, macaroons are surely much better than puddings. Adding to that, if I add in Bitch-chan’s blood to it…haha, there, we have the most delicious dessert. (1:47) R: My point is, may you please donate your thick, delicious blood to Raito? A: Oi, you pervert! Don’t even dare to lay a hand on no-breast without my permission! R: Whoops, I never thought that you’d be looking…I thought that you were right in the middle of pudding war! While you guys were at it, I was planning to suck blood out of Bitch-chan. A: …! K: Raito! I wouldn’t allow such thing! R: huh~? Even Kanato’s saying no? Aha, well I guess it’s my loss… Anyway, what happened to the pudding? K: The victory isn’t obtained by either of us yet…! But above that, the blood of that stupid-looking face is more precious at the moment! (02:24) A: I see that you prefer no-breast’s blood more than the pudding K: …! A: hahaha K: Ayato…! Are you trying to mock me? A: No way! Who in the world would mock someone bothersome as you? Anyway, the only one who’s allowed to do whatever they want with no-breast’s blood is only me. R: Hm? I can’t agree to that… Isn’t that something that us males shouldn’t decide anyway? K: Even so, I don’t quite think that the pest there deciding would be the right option either. (03:20) A: What a bother…the one who sucks first should be the best dressed! Oi, no-breast, come this way R: Ayato! If you’re thinking that everything is going to flow how you want it, that’s a big mistake!*grabs your arm* K: Hey Raito! Please take your hands off that person! Don’t touch my possessions without my permission…! *everyone pulling you* A: Let go! No-breast is mine…! K: Like I would let go of her…! I’m definitely not going to let go! This person is mine…! (04:00) R: You two, get over it! Besides, the very first person who was going to suck her blood was me! A: argh, you piece of shit…! K: Let…go! R: Hey…! It’s like the arm is going to be ripped…! (04:25) A: I’m not gonna let go! K: Uggh…! I’m reaching my limit…! *lets go on the hand* *crashes into each other* K: Oww…shit, I crashed in so hard… R: See…I told you! If you’ve given in the pudding to me, this wouldn’t have ha-…hey, what…? Why am I… A: What is this…? There’s ‘me’ in front of me… Huh? Wait, what? I turned into Ayato!? K: That’s so true…! But I turned into Kanato R: I-…I turned into Raito…Why did this happen…!?!? (05:42) R: So basically, because of the impact of colliding into each other, our personality swapped…? K: Raito swapped into my body…er, and I swapped into Kanato’s body…and in Raito’s body is Kanato…so that’s it! R: No way…I can believe this…but…this is the truth, right…? (06:19) A: Aha, well this is interesting… K: Well, I guess so…I never thought that we’d swap around R: Can swap-arounds be made by someone’s will…? If it’s possible, that’s be pretty convenient… A: no-breast! No-breast, no-breast! Hm? What is it, bitch-chan? Oh, I just wanted to say no-breast like Ayato always says! Ahaha (06:49) R: ah, I kind of get what you mean, Rait-…this feels so confusing… You have Ayato’s appearance, but inside is Raito… K: Huh? What do you mean, you no-breast. Are you even saying that it’s confusing? Well, even if we stay like this, it’s not like there’s gonna be a massive trouble A: Exactly what he said! You’ll only be confused for the first few moments! R: That’s true. I don’t really mind this situation. Besides that, I’d like to try something out… A: Ah, me too! I’m curious to know what it’d be like to suck blood using this body! I’d love to try out… K: Same here… It will be the most interesting part, because I bet that the taste would be different too… (07:49) K: Hey no-breast, let me suck you. R: huh? No? Why is that…? Are…you saying…that you can’t listen to our needs…? A: Hm? It’ll feel weird? It’s not like I don’t get what you mean, but Bitch-chan, I bet you’ve had a taste of everyone’s fangs anyway, so you’d be wanting something new, right? Aha, you might feel more pleasure than usual because we’ve swapped around… (08:35) K: Huh? You say that’ll never happen? Tch… Well you sound so great for a mere no-breast. What? It’s not fair for me, and the secrets that you guys keep might leak out, you say? A: What we keep as a secret… Haha, there’s too much for me, that it worries me R: Well, I expected that for Raito. As for me…oh, the hiding places for my confectionary would be found out… On top of that, it’d be disgusting to hold Teddy around in Raito’s body… (09:17) K: that’s true… But even if we want to go back into normal, how are we supposed to do that? A: Perhaps we just need to collide our heads together again! But I don’t want to go through the pain K: I know right? I’m not gonna do it either! So no-breast, there isn’t gonna be much harm, so let’s not care much about it and get over it! (09:42) R: That’s true. Perhaps we might turn back if we sleep… Hey, where did she go? K: What…? Oh, she’s not around. A: Did she run away? R: Ah, she came back… Hey where did you get that hammer from…? A: You borrowed it from Reiji…? Wait, Bitch-chan, your eyes are scaring me. I’m hoping that this isn’t what you’re thinking, but you’re not going to smash our heads with that…right? (10:23) *you swing the hammer down* A: Aahh! She was thinking of it! K: Wait! No-breast, wait a sec!! You don’t really need to smash our heads with something big as that! R: You-, you’re so aggressive! Just because you’re treated like a pest, you have no need to smash us legally! *you swing again* K: That was so close…! Isn’t your personality swapped with a violent o-, ONE!?!? A: Ca-, Calm down Bitch-chan! It’s better off to run away!! (11:00) R: Wha! What are you doing…!? I’m against violence! Waaaa!! K: Besides, what…makes you so desperate!? I don’t understand! A: Well, I guess it’s better off to think positive that she preferred our original form…! R: Either way, if we don’t run away, we’ll Be smashed into pieces! K: I can’t afford to be done that…! I’d never wanna be done that by the likes of no-breast!! *you swing the hammer multiple times* A: Bitch-chan!! Calm down!! *swing* R: Pudding…! That’s right, I’ll give you the rest of my pudding, so calm down! K: Arrrgh!! This is such a bother!! Get over this for god’s sake!! All you have to do is so ignore the unnatural feel about this!!!

Tattsun and Kaji-kyun or maybe Ban and Meliodas from Nanatsu no Taizai? XD

Translation

*Sound of steps*

Kanato : Ngh! Let go of me! Shit, let me go!

*Yuma drops Kanato to the ground*

Kanato : Ouch! Why you suddenly let go!? It hurts! Don’t fuck with me!

Yuma : Haaaa? You were the one who said to let go!

ヾ(･ω･`｡) Heyya sinners~! I got asked to record Yuma crying from his Manservant End in Dark Fate, so here it is. Spoilers Ahoy! (」゜ロ゜)」Only listen and read if you want to.  Enjoy~! (*´_ゝ｀) Well wait, why would I tell you to enjoy Yuma crying? (；-◞౪◟-) You can enjoy hearing Yuma say Yui! Errr, enjoy the ride on the feels train then.~

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