in the woods

Chapter 1

The transition from the sun-drenched, chaotic rooftops of Lyari to the subterranean chill of the Special Investigation Wing was not a descent; it was an erasure.

Uzair Baloch sat in the back of the armored transport, his wrists bound by zip-ties that bit into his skin with every jolt of the vehicle. He didn't struggle. He didn't shout. He was a man who understood the rhythm of power, and right now, the rhythm had shifted. He assumed this was a temporary setback-a political play by the SP or a maneuver by the Foreign Ministry to save face after the recent border skirmish.

He waited for Hamza.

In Uzair’s mind, Hamza was already working the phones, leaning on their contacts in the provincial assembly, or preparing a tactical breakout if the legal routes failed. Hamza was the architect. Uzair was the foundation. One could not stand without the other.

He didn't know that the architect had already demolished the building.

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Five miles away, in a room that smelled of ozone and expensive cologne, the air was static. This wasn't a cell; it was a sanctuary of high-level intelligence. The Pakistani Minister, a man whose soft hands had never held anything heavier than a pen, sat at the head of a mahogany table.

Opposite him stood a man the world knew as Hamza Ali Mazari.

But the posture was different. The slouch of the Lyari gangster was gone, replaced by a terrifyingly rigid, military precision. Beside him stood his handler, a senior operative whose presence in India was a ghost story told in intelligence circles.

"The asset is secure," the handler said, his voice clipped. "But the narrative needs to be absolute. If there is even a shadow of a doubt that Uzair was working under our direction, the blowback will reach the capital."

The Minister wiped a bead of sweat from his upper lip. "The streets are already burning. If I tell them Uzair Baloch-the man they called the 'Son of the Soil'-is a RAW plant, they will tear the city apart."

"Let them," Hamza said.

It was the first time he had spoken. The voice was cold, devoid of the familiar Karachi lilt that Uzair found so grounding. This was the voice of Jaskirat, an agent who had lived a lie so long it had become a second skin.

"Uzair is a spent shell," Jaskirat continued, his eyes fixed on the map of the border pinned to the wall. "I didn't keep him alive because of loyalty. I kept him alive because a dead martyr creates a vacuum. A living traitor creates a distraction."

The Minister looked at him, unsettled by the lack of emotion in the agent’s eyes. "You spent five years at his right hand. You saved his life in the Shershah ambush. You’re telling me that was all... utility?"

Jaskirat’s jaw tightened, a microscopic fracture in his composure that he smoothed over instantly. "Every bullet I stopped for him was an investment in my own cover. I needed him to trust me blindly so that when the time came to burn him, he wouldn't see the match until the room was already on fire. He’s the perfect scapegoat. Use him. Feed him to the hawks. Tell the public he sold out the resistance for Indian gold."

The handler nodded. "Put him in the Black Wing. Transfer him to the ISI's high-security facility in Rawalpindi. If he’s going to be an Indian spy in the eyes of the public, let him be treated like one."

The Minister sighed, sensing the political necessity. "And the torture? The 'interrogation'?"

"Make it visible," Jaskirat said, his voice flat. "Let the guards know exactly who he is. Let them know he’s the reason their brothers died at the border. He doesn't get a quick end. He gets the slow rot."

As the Minister began to draft the order, Jaskirat turned to leave.

"Jaskirat," the handler called out.

The agent paused at the door, his hand on the cold steel handle.

"You did well. The extraction of the deep-cell codes was flawless."

Jaskirat didn't look back. "The mission is the only thing that matters, sir."

But as he stepped into the hallway, his hand stayed on the door handle a second too long. His fingers trembled, just once, before he shoved them into his pockets and walked into the dark.

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The transfer didn't happen in a van. It happened in a hood.

Uzair felt the rough burlap pull over his head, the world turning into a suffocating gray haze. He was dragged, not walked. The boots of his captors were heavy, the sound echoing off stone walls that felt miles deep.

When the hood was finally ripped off, the light was a physical blow. He was in a room that didn't exist on any official map. It was a concrete box, four feet by six. There was no bed, only a drain in the floor and a single, flickering bulb protected by a wire cage.

The door didn't just close; it boomed.

"Uzair Baloch," a voice sneered from the small slat in the door.

Uzair stood up, his legs shaky but his spirit still projecting the aura of the Lyari king. "Where is Hamza? I want my phone call. I know my rights."

A mocking laugh drifted through the slat. "Rights? You’re an Indian dog. You don't have rights. You have a shelf life."

A newspaper was shoved through the slot, hitting the damp floor with a wet thud.

Uzair picked it up. His hands, usually so steady they could aim a pistol in a gale, shook as he read the headline.

THE TRAITOR OF LYARI: UZAIR BALOCH REVEALED AS RAW ASSET.

Below the headline was a photo of him and Hamza. But the caption didn't mention Hamza as an accomplice. It described Hamza Ali Mazari as the "Patriotic Whistleblower" who had risked his life to expose the rot at the heart of the resistance. It quoted Hamza-his Hamza-detailing how Uzair had sold out troop movements for years.

Disbelief is a slow poison. It didn't hit Uzair all at once. He read the words again. And again. He looked for a code, a hidden message, a sign that this was a ruse they were playing together.

He kept me alive to use me.

The words from the briefing-relayed by the guard with sadistic glee-began to sink in.

"He said you were easy," the guard whispered through the door. "He said you were so desperate for a brother that you didn't see the knife until it was in your ribs. He’s a hero now. And you? You’re just meat."

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The first week was a blur of sensory deprivation and sudden, violent noise.

They didn't want information; they wanted a confession. But more than that, they wanted to break the legend. Every guard who walked past the cell felt it was their patriotic duty to spit on the door. Every meal-a bowl of thin, sandy dal-was served with a side of vitriol.

"Indian bastard."

"How much did they pay you to kill our boys?"

"Does your mother know she raised a dog?"

Uzair endured it in silence. He sat in the corner of his cell, his eyes fixed on the wall. He was imagining the rooftops. He was imagining the way Hamza used to make tea-too much sugar, always stirred clockwise. He was trying to find the moment the lie started.

Was it the night in the Shershah ambush? Hamza had pulled him behind a burning car, screaming for him to stay down. Had that been "investment"?

Was it the way Hamza’s hand had lingered on his shoulder when they buried Uzair’s cousin? Had that been "utility"?

The physical pain began on the tenth day.

They took him to the "Wash Room." It wasn't for cleaning. It was a room with a slanted floor and high-pressure hoses. They stripped him of the last of his dignity, leaving him shivering on the cold concrete while they interrogated him about contacts he didn't have and missions he never ran.

"I don't know," Uzair would whisper, his voice cracking from thirst.

The slap of the hose was the only answer.

They used the methods every Indian spy caught in the "Great Game" had faced for decades. Sleep deprivation. The "cold room" where the air conditioner was cranked until his skin turned blue. The "bright room" where he couldn't close his eyes for forty-eight hours.

But the physical torture paled in comparison to the psychological rot. The guards would play recordings of the news over the intercom-reports of Hamza receiving commendations, reports of the Lyari people burning effigies of Uzair in the streets.

They were erasing him. And Hamza was holding the eraser.

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By the third week, Uzair’s body was a map of bruises and cigarette burns. He had lost twenty pounds. His eyes, once sharp and commanding, were sunken and haunted.

He was leaning against the wall of his cell when the door opened. It wasn't a guard with a hose. It was a man in a suit-a junior official from the Ministry.

"He sent me," the official whispered, looking nervously over his shoulder.

Uzair’s heart gave a pathetic, hopeful leap. "Hamza?"

The official shook his head. "He’s Jaskirat now. He’s already being prepped for extraction back across the border. He’s done, Uzair. He’s going home."

Uzair felt a coldness settle in his chest that no "cold room" could match. "Home

"He wanted me to give you this," the official said, sliding a small, crumpled piece of paper into Uzair’s hand before scurrying away.

Uzair waited until the footsteps faded. He opened the paper with trembling fingers.

There were no words. Just a hand-drawn map of a small cafe in Delhi-a place Hamza had once described as a "dream" in one of their rare, quiet moments.

It was a cruelty beyond measure. A reminder of a future that was never real. A breadcrumb leading to a cliff.

Uzair crumpled the paper and shoved it into his mouth, swallowing the dry, bitter pulp. He wouldn't give them the satisfaction of finding it.

He slumped back against the wall, his head thumping against the concrete.

Outside, the call to prayer began to echo over the city of Rawalpindi. Inside, there was only the sound of a man who had lost his country, his crown, and his heart, finally beginning to laugh-a dry, hacking sound that turned into a sob.

He was Uzair Baloch. He was a king of the dirt. And he was the greatest masterpiece of a man named Jaskirat.

The torture would continue. The hate would intensify. The world would forget him. But in the dark, Uzair closed his eyes and could still feel the phantom weight of a hand on his shoulder-a hand that had never been there for him, but for the mission.

He was alone. And for the first time in his life, Uzair Baloch was afraid of the dark.

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In a safehouse near the Line of Control, Jaskirat stood by a window, watching the mist roll over the mountains. He was dressed in clean clothes-a simple sweater and jeans. He looked like a civilian. He looked like a man who was ready to go home.

His handler entered the room, checking his watch. "Transport arrives in ten minutes. You’re a hero, Jaskirat. The Prime Minister wants a personal briefing."

"Yes, sir," Jaskirat said.

"You look tired."

"It was a long mission, sir."

"Uzair is in the Pindi facility. They say he isn't talking. Not that it matters. The conviction is already a formality."

Jaskirat looked at his reflection in the glass. He saw a stranger. He saw a man who had built a throne out of lies and sat a friend on it just to watch it burn.

"He was a good asset," Jaskirat whispered.

"The best," the handler agreed. "Because he loved you. And in our business, love is the best leverage there is."

Jaskirat didn't respond. He picked up his bag and walked toward the door. He didn't look at the mountains. He didn't look at the border. He just looked straight ahead, into a future where he would never have to say the name Uzair Baloch again, and where he would never, for as long as he lived, be able to forget the sound of it.

The door clicked shut, leaving the room in a silence so profound it felt like a grave.

UZAIR: *rolls eye* Seedha? Seedha?? Bhai ka zikr hota hai toh teri gurdan tak surkh ho jati hai, Sp. Hadd ho gayi hai abb. Phele apni sakal dekh fir mere rehman bhai ke saapne dekh . Kuch toh haaya rakh, chaudhry. Kab tak mere bhai ke peeche bhaagega? (He's sitting on hamza's lap)

KHANANI: *side-eyes uzair* *looks down at screen* *sees rehman's face as wallpaper staring back* *puts phone back in pocket* haa ....bikhul! Hum sab seedhe hi toh hain yahan. Sp shaab..! *attempts at real laugh*

SAJID(iqbal jisko shaddi mai biwi ki tarah laya tha): *lights iqbals cigar*

IQBAL: *lets a puff out* Hame aap loge ke mardo ke shauko se koi talquk nahi. Agar ye fazool guftagu khatam ho gayi ho… toh kuch kaam ki baat kar lein. *puts his legs on the table*

SAJID: *gets on knees* [???????] *starts massgaing iqbal's leg* *hands conceringly..... high*

IQBAL: *groans* Bhut khubb. Esse hi. Aache se. Ha~ vahi.

Everyone else: .............

SAJID: *hands even..... higher*

[15 silent minutes later][+more groans(that no one wanted to hear) from iqbal]

IQBAL: Shabash bete. *taps twice on sajid's cheek* jaa, Lekin 9 min aur 6 sec mai wapas yahi.

SAJID: *nods* *bows* *kisses iqbal's knee* *gets up* *refuses to elaborate--> leaves*

[Silence](again)

KHANANI: *nervous laugh* Huh.... *adjusts shalwar* jaanab?

UZAIR : ... *whispers* bsdk ye kya tha.

IQBAL: *looks up at uzair* Akele mulakat ho, chhote sher. Baki ham sab baata bhi denge. Aur *grins* sab sikha bhi denge.

UZAIR: ....... *cig drops from his lips*

HAMZA: *was that a collar around sajid's neck- yk what? He doesnt wanna know* (he wanna kill everyone then himself)

ASLAM: *stares* Kinn chutiyo ke beech fass gaya. Kiss kutte ki baduaein lagi- oh. Ofc! Aur kon! *stroms out to find rehman*

[based on hc: Iqbal likes to be the most freaked out person in the room. He's very competetive about his freakiness.] + [aslam asking the wrong room about heterosexuality]

i have a exam tommorow last night i was so pissed off i decied to be pissed off on capcut instead <3 and fell asleep and wake up to this. Yeah. This. I shoulf go back to studying now im dying 💔🙏 will i ever finish it? Who knows

If u see me lurking in tumblr before 27? Shoot me on sight

Idk how i feel about this but rehman lipsync is on point 🙏