RE-WRITTEN BOG POST
For our last blog post in unit Comm140, our blog post were to be assessed by our peers with written feedback. From this feedback, we would then have to re-write our post to improve the quality with as much reference to the feedback that was provided.
The blogger that provided me with feedback was:
Jack O’Neill... you can view his blog on https://comm14000.tumblr.com/
FEEDBACK on Blog Post 1 - Is there more to online games than fun?
Perhaps personal anecdotes that weren’t related to the Comm140 task that “Marcusfromcomm140” would have been of better use in a blog that is available for everyone to see, as this would have made the anecdote easier to relate to. Not everyone is doing a Bachelor of Education (Primary). “Marcusfromcomm140” however was successful in stating what makes a game fun, such as “needs to intrigue the user”, creating a “drive of wanting to complete it to the best of your ability” and “it needs to be challenging”. Also by gathering statistics from websites to support “Online gaming is an intensely social phenomenon, with millions of young adults and children around the globe interacting constantly” would have further improved the quality of this blog post.
Re-Written Blog Post
Well this is an easy question, with an easy answer… YES! Of course, the first thing that I think of an online game is that I am immediately drawn to the fact that it has to be fun, however that is not all an online game is. For example for my university course I am asked to create an online game in groups for children aged 7 -11, and whilst making this game I am realizing more and more about all the other relevant factors to making a successful online game. So apart from making it fun, it is crucial that a game must have an objective or a goal that users try to reach in order to complete the game, therefore not only must it be fun, it needs to be challenging. A successful game needs to intrigue the user into being determined to want to finish it… that is what makes a game addictive, that drive of wanting to complete it to the best of your ability and better than everyone else. Along with making an online game challenging, to ensure a successful game it must have a great story, as well as the games artwork being vibrant. With reference to “What Makes a Great Game?” by plural sight A successful online games needs to enforce users to become addicted to it, and in order to do that, not only must game be challenging but it need to look and sound attractive to draw people into it. You can view this article here on https://www.pluralsight.com/blog/film-games/what-makes-a-great-game-the-key-elements-of-successful-games. I believe that online gaming is an intensely social phenomenon, with millions of young adults and children around the globe interacting constantly, to not only play and have fun, but also to share information, challenge themselves and to interact to everyone around the world.














