woah this character is so cool i wish they were covered in blood their whole body trembling with a look of absolute horror on their face as theyre struggling to breathe in panic

revising your writing is just like "is this weird. is this a weird sentence. is this the weirdest most poorly-worded sentence ever written by anyone" and the sentence in question is "he walked across the room"

Shapeshifter: [transforms to look like Kenma] Kuroo, offended: You look nothing like Kenma?? First off, his eyes are more golden. Secondly, his hair is at least a half centimeter longer and lastly, if you would brush yours, you'd be like a 7 at best and Kenma's a constant 10 even with bedhead!!