Simply Liz

Alright, well to begin I like your url. Its nice and short and easy for people to remember. Looking at your main, I liked how you designed it. Its nice and neat, and really easy for people to navigate. I think the only thing I would say is that your main looks more of an rah main, rather than an rpg. I do like how it looks but it doesn’t really tell the people about what the role-play is about. This leads me to my next point, and that’s your graphics. They look good but, again it doesn’t really tell me what your role-play is about. Maybe add in a beach as a background, something that tells role-players what this might be about. And so that brings me to your color scheme. It is great and they mesh well together so that’s its easy on the eyes, although because this is a resort/gang rp. I probably will go with something that represents that theme of the role-play. As for your plot, I like the concept. I like how you put together a bunch of individual role-plays and put it together. Its a great twist to a resort rp, and its also a different vibe from a gang rp. So that’s good. I also liked how you described and explained it. You have enough info for people to get the rp, and I think its written well to get people hooked on it. I think that is a great role-play, with a good plot to it. 

Well to start off, I like your url. Its short and sweet and to the point. It doesn’t have all the unnecessary stuff and its easy to remember, so that’s good. So looking at your main, I really like how neat it is. Everything is very organized and where it needs to be, so easy to find all the information you need. I also liked how you designed it. The colour scheme works well together and when you click on the page its easy on the eyes. Its not plain but its also not too bright, and I like that. As for your graphics, there isn’t anything really special about them. They’re very good, but I don’t think that its really telling of what your role-play is about. So I think I would maybe add in a few more things to the graphics, just so that its more eye catching. Plot wise, I like the concept. Its unique and different, however, (I don’t know if it is just me) I did get a little confused while reading it and didn’t really get what the role-play is about until the end. So maybe just add in a little bit more detail explaining what Supreme is and then go into the plot. Other than that, I think that this is a very well thought out role-play and I think that you can even extend it beyond just being a 10x10.