Klown

Characters:

Main (Amber)

Sister (Entity)

Mom (???)

Dark..  The room was always dark, and quiet, and messy

Often times her mom would tell her to clean it but she never had the motivation to clean it

For her everyday was a battlefield, the people in her life her the rounds of ammunition being shot at her, everyday actions like “socializing” were grenades and aerial strikes, in war there was only one way to avoid it all; the trenches

Every so often though, the trenches were gassed out, the room was no longer safe… if the trenches were unsafe, what then? 

death

cruel, agonizing, suffocating death at the hands of mustard gas, at the hands of her mother

It wasn’t always like this, or at least she doesn’t think so…

To be honest, she doesn’t remember a time before this, but that’s more so a failure of her memory rather than a failure of her mother

nothing is ever a failure on her mothers side

Before it became so suffocating there was an entity, an unknowable, almost lovecraftian

Her sister

The entity was at least 5 years older than her, so she says

The entity was the first victim of the mother, so she says

The entity was just living her life, so she says

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Dark, there was no light at the end of the tunnel cause it was

Dark, there was no life in the house cause it was

Dark, the whole world was plunged in

Dark, cause she never smiled after… she ran away or at least; so she says

Amber never trusted herself, every thought she had was deemed wrong

The entity didn’t run away cause Mom hated her, The entity ran away cause she was defective

I cried in the car cause of just how emotional that ending was

I mean of course the writing was on the wall to what was gonna happen (literally) but still, what the fuck

There was this once scene where I had to hold my tongue to not yell at a character cause of what they were doing

Something I loved was the visual story telling

The way the VHS is used to signify when a character is feeling a lot of negative emotions at once

The way the light hearted stuff is in Gangle (or Zoobles I'm not sure which one) artstyle

The muffin in the Cafe being split in exact halves representing the way a brainscan looks.

The way that when Pomni tries to take her VR headset she touches her face, which if you used a headset you'd know you can only touch around you're face cause there's something physically there, that being the headset