reader-insert vs OC fanfic rampage incoming
buckles in for a long post because apparently I have Thoughts
So this whole rant started because I've been getting a lot of comments on my current fanfic about why it's tagged as reader-insert instead of OC. There were also statements that it's actually an OC but labeled as reader-insert or that they can't relate to the reader character so it doesn't count as reader-insert.
Honestly? I didn't think this would be such a big thing, but here we are. So let me break down my personal journey from reader-insert hater to… well, someone who writes them now. Because apparently character development is real.
So I've been reading fanfic for over 20 years (yes I'm ancient) and "back then" the reader-insert fanfic phenomenon didn't exist (at least not to the extent that I would have noticed it).
My last hyperfixation had me trapped in a tiny fandom for serval years where it was all OC x Canon character stories before reader-inserts took hold. I devoured masses of these OC fanfics, saved them, re-read them- so I definitely had no problem with OCs at all.
Then I moved to Star Wars fandom (because Vader has been my problematic fave man since before I knew what fanfic was) and...
(side note: I'm not picky with Vader pairings - my library has pretty much everything (favorite: Piett/Vader & Boba Fett/Vader), except Obi-Wan and Palpatine because those power dynamics just don't do it for me …and no real Padmé/Vader content - because, much like with Obi-Wan, it’s just way too much Anakin baggage. when i say i want Vader, i mean Vader, not Anakin, and not “Redemption Vader but basically reads as Anakin waltzing back like nothing ever happened")
I was quite surprised by the ratio of reader-insert to OC fanfics – I was especially surprised that I could find relatively few OC fanfics that hit my personal taste.
the"wtf is this?" & "ew, cringe" phase
I thought reader-inserts were cringe af
The Y/N thing made me want to throw up on my screen.
The whole concept felt way too close to home - I didn't want to read about myself in a fanfic (after all, I read fanfic for escapism)
plot twist: I became the very thing I swore to mock
Eventually I ran out of alternatives and gave reader-inserts a chance and... okay fine, some of them were actually really well written??? And I could engage with them???
Currently I have like a dozen Vader/Reader fics saved and literally ZERO Vader/OC fics in my library (seriously if you have recs please send them I'm begging)
At some point, this got me thinking about the whole topic:
what bothers me so much about these OC-Storys now and why am I suddenly okay with reader-insert? And why did I escalate the whole thing and write a reader-insert fanfic myself?
(don't come for me, this is just my experience)
OC fics (especially longfics) often become too focused on the OCs themselves; diving deep into external descriptions, personal style, characterization, and an almost obsessive pursuit of perfection. Many channel either their personal beauty ideals or work through their own experiences and trauma through these characters. I don't want to criticize this approach at all; it's completely logical to want to craft your character precisely, especially since fanfiction readers already have established mental images of the canon characters. It's natural to project your ideal concepts onto a character you've created, particularly when you spend countless hours with them in your imagination, often designing them as the perfect love interest for your favorite character.
However, this tendency frequently leads OCs down a dreaded Mary Sue path. These characters aren't just beautiful, slender, petite, and brilliantly intelligent; they often possess overpowered abilities that completely overshadow everything else, including the canon characters readers originally came for.
Reader characters aren't immune to the Mary Sue phenomenon either. They can just as easily become overly perfect, overpowered, or exaggerated. But they sidestep one particularly challenging element for many readers: physical appearance, which is inherently subjective. Not everyone wants to encounter yet another story featuring the endless descriptions of (hyperbole alert) “super-petite natural beauty with curves in all the right places, striking emerald eyes and waist-length black hair, clad in leather corset and stiletto boots.” (you know the type. we’ve all been there.)
I absolutely believe it's possible to create an Oc who avoids Mary Sue territory; one who doesn't embody perfection in every aspect and isn't solely guided by personal ideals, but is thoughtfully constructed for their specific narrative role.
But one point must always be kept in mind: fanfics are first and foremost about the characters of the fandom; otherwise, one might as well write an entirely original novel. And this is precisely what fanfic readers expect: they want to see their favourite characters in action, in interaction, and in development. While a well-crafted OC can certainly win over readers, authors must remember that their audience isn't there for the OC; they're there for the canon characters. This creates a delicate balancing act: introducing an OC in a way that gives readers a clear sense of who they are, while avoiding front-loading chapters so heavily that the canon characters lose room to breathe and grow
The Reader-Insert Revelation
I don't actually imagine myself in reader-insert fanfictions
I know, for some this may sound weird... I quickly discovered that reader-insert stories work perfectly for my escapist needs because I interpret both the reader character and the Y/N as placeholders that can be filled with whatever I choose.
Some readers have commented that they can't identify with my reader character, suggesting it's more like an OC. But here's the thing: I find it incredibly difficult to realistically introduce a completely blank slate character in the Star Wars universe and have them believably interact with Vader ((at least the way I want and need it for the fanfic) This might work more easily in other fandoms, but given the vast array of planets, species, individuals and Vader's unique position, a character absolutely must have some established background to realistically encounter him in the long-term.
The reader-insert fanfictions I've read and loved all share one common trait: their reader characters come partially developed with backstories I can't personally relate to. I'm not a former Inquisitor, not a Rebel pilot, not a medical professional. And that's exactly the point: I'm not supposed to be the reader character. I can project whatever I want onto Y/N.
From a professional perspective, I simply love the narrative perspective. I spent considerable time studying perspective in fiction, which deepened my appreciation for this approach (= It's fun to write)
A turning point in my thinking came from watching a friend run a D&D campaign. As Dungeon Master, he addresses players in second person while they interact through self-designed characters. I thought, " funny. It's a bit like Reader-Fanfics, just that the actual readers don't sit down beforehand and work out the character to the smallest detail". My story provides a character framework and background, then essentially says: feel free to fill in the rest however you'd like (though there are a few unavoidable specifics like the prosthetic, hair, basic anatomy).
This approach removes all pressure to describe the character's external appearance and eliminates the constant internal debate between "What do I find beautiful or fitting?" and "What's realistic while avoiding beauty standards that contribute to suffering and self-hatred?"
The reader character being more developed internally than externally is simply a product of the written medium. ( If I could draw competently and existed in the fanart sphere, it might be exactly the opposite.)
For me, the reader character functions as a kind of "reverse Barbie": Barbie provides you with a face and figure, then asks you to imagine her personality and inner life. Reader-inserts often give you a soul: a voice, moral compass, and personal history, while leaving the mirror empty, waiting for your interpretation.
Maybe I'm approaching reader-insert fanfic wrong or unconventionally. I know many people find reader-inserts cringeworthy- often because they don't want to read about themselves and hate "Y/N". ➡️ Names are incredibly personal; whether it's something like Seraphina Cassiopeia Moonwhisper Nightshade or simple names like Sarah or Liz, you often unconsciously associate certain character traits with names that the author never intended. I do prioritize avoiding Y/N whenever possible, but sometimes I'd rather drop in a Y/N than twist myself into literary pretzels trying to find elaborate workarounds for addressing someone.
Fortunately, reading fanfic is entirely optional - no one is forced to read reader-insert stories. If you discover that a reader character doesn't appeal to you at all, it's completely acceptable to stop reading. 😊
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