Hello, sorry for bothering you again. My presentation is about cosmetic surgery. Help please? What should my title be? and should i include argument and counter argument in ethics, sense perception, emotions... ?? Please answer ASAP.. Thanks
Hi there. We’re not exactly so sure what your life situation is so we’ll just run through a structure with you. However, if you’re looking for a real life situation, you could definitely find something online about breast reconstruction following mastectomy/double mastectomy or lumpectomy with breast cancers?
Title example: Is it ever ethically justifiable to undergo cosmetic surgery?
We could recommend that you use deontology and consequentialism with your arguments FOR and AGAINST. Therefore the structure would be:
Introduction.
- definitions (of your ethics, sense perception, emotions or deontology, consequentialism etc)
- introduce your real life situation
- explain what the speech will present.
Argument one (deontology for example/or ethics) FOR!!
- include your real life situation and argue it in a way that it justifies cosmetic surgery
- a good example may include someone who is otherwise seen to be entirely unattractive or was born with a defect that is not widely accepted in a ‘beautiful’ society (ie; cleft palate, burns as a child, cosmetic surgery involving breast reconstruction for uneven breasts etc).
- make sure that you put in a few statistics (find them online), revealing how numbers have been increasing in cosmetic surgery as more people find it available to them to enhance or rectify parts of their appearance that otherwise causes them damage (ie; causes them to self-harm, feel depressed or simply have low self confidence or image).
- This allows you to explain that cosmetic surgery is doing good because we are all entitled to change ourselves should be we in a place that we feel unhappy with appearance features. This is also where you could bring in Kant’s principle, or deontology quotations that reveal choice about things.
Maybe also involve make-up and tanning/push up bras and other alternative ways that we use = so is cosmetic a permanent solution to what we spend so much time trying to do with other objects?
- THEN bring in your counter. Maybe reveal that while this seems justifiable, shouldn’t we just use the makeup/bras/tanning devices already in place without choosing some permanent solutions that may later be a problem. It’s good to use your real life situation in here (such as someone who has a cleft palate - maybe argue that they could be themselves in this position and still contribute to society?) or you could argue that it is causing problems in what we perceive. HOWEVER, you must then add an anticounter to show that the whole point is not ruined by this, for example say that while our alternatives are good, cosmetic surgery provides an outlet that is helping many people like transgender when the decision needs to be permanent.
- All the while, include various quotations (you can find these on realquoptes etc specific to your subject from weird philosophers as it add to the credibility sometimes). And add stats. Also mention how this links to your ways of knowledge (ie, we know via sense perception and emotions, but shouldn’t we be able to choose how those reflect on us? therefore cosmetic surgery is justifiable?)
Argument two (Deontology for example/or ethics) AGAINST!!
Now you flip it all around.
You do everything as was instructed in the FOR only you’re proving that it is wrong, it is not a healthy alternative and we are causing our society to be fat-food endorsing, surgery hopeful people that over-exercise, over indulge and have some of the highest rates of depression/suicide in young people, simply because these surgeries come at such a high price and we are bombarded with views that are so impossible to live up to. For example, korean/asian people having huge procedures to be more westernized. It is ruining cultures. If your real life example is also about something similar (ie, mastectomy, maybe argue that it is not possible or economically viable for all breast cancer survivors to undergo reconstruction and cosmetic surgery, therefore it is not fair for some and not others, so by allowing this we are further perpetuating an inability to be ‘beautiful’ via society’s standards and not only are these women/men dealing with the horrors of breast cancer but also societal pressures/perception (link back to your idea about sense perception/emotions/ethics and how we are further causing people to be unable to accept difference or abnormal things, bringing an unhealthy sameness that causing people to commit suicide when they feel inadequate). You must also add a counter, reflect on your real life situation, and then anticounter. Counter it by saying that we need to make people feel safe and as they wish to be perceived, that it is wrong to say that we don’t have this as a good alternative because it is all down to choice, and society should not be close-minded when looking at others. Surgery should only enhance differences, rather than perfect abnormalities. Then anticounter it similarly as though your point previously was also so valid, saying ‘hey, we should be happy with our lot and it’s not always economically viable, therefore makeup and bras are often suitable and acceptable offers that are more affordable and less dangerous).
From this you may choose to do your other area (emotions sense perception or consequentialism. And do another FOR and AGAINST. These are down the same as the previous two, and then you come to your LOGICAL conclusion and PERSONAL conclusion ( VERY DIFFERENT).
Logical conclusion is proven by your facts/stats and the argument flow that directs towards/against the FOR or AGAINST argument relating to your title (is it or is it NOT ethically justifiable?)
Personal conclusion is by your own opinions (however, this isn’t emotionally driven and it may be the SAME to your logical conclusion). It is intelligent to include this because often we accept what is right, but we don’t always totally agree with it. It’s good to say, “hey, i believe this is ethically unjust, however, I understand that in our society, it is still playing a key role when it is afforded by some, and by removing it from society, we would be perpetuating further discomfort for certain groups that it benefits, for example gender reassignment for transgender, and breast reconstruction for breast cancer survivors. That being said, it is still difficult for me to personally accept it.”
We apologise for such a LONG post, but this is definitely something we’re very passionate about and have been teaching a lot about in our TOK lessons.
Hopefully something in there helps. If you need explanations, help with linking your real life situation or little chapter edits, we’re happy to help!
Thanks a lot and GOOD LUCK!
IBintrouble team.









