jade

Okay, now... my favorite details, or at least some of them cause if I put all then this will get way too long: El's plants in her room, I feel like she'd be such a plant mom and take such good care of them and give them all cute, little names because it makes her happy; Max's hand in her hair when she's lying on the bed; the green outlines for Max's shirt even on the write parts of it; El's blue hairtie; El's many earrings and Max's nose piercing; the design of the pillows and the byler blanket on El's bed!!!; El wrote all the names on the pieces of paper in blue sparkly gel pen because she would!!! She would use those pens to write everything; the bottle they use is a water bottle lol; also I just like the way El's hand looks when it's next to her knee on the bottom left frame of the second page; all their nailpolish colors (including Will and Mike's; I really like both El and Max's shirt designs and the way El's pants are rolled up; the close up of the walkie turned out sooo good!!; El blushing when she tries to tell Max what she's seeing; El and Max friendship bracelets they made for each other (also they both have more specific designs than just stripes cause I love making friendship bracelets and think they have so many cute designs); I really like the way the transition from the yellow to the black background looks; Max also doing the little "huh" after she asked El what she means by "huh" and El calling her out on it; the blanket over the back of the basement couch (I've realized that I really like drawing those quilt-style blankets, they're so fun); also whenever I reread the comic the byler reveal makes me so excited like I'll be jumping up and down even though I've literally made this comic and reread it so many times already; both Max and Mike's freckles; Will pushing Mike's legs open hehe; Mike's fingers in Will's hair and especially the way they look when you only see the top of their heads (I also really like that view/perspective of it, like first you only get to see the hair and Mike's hand and Then you get the reveal of their full pose in the next frame); Will grabbing Mike's wrist; the hickeysss hidden under their shirts; I adore the idea of El not fully knowing what Will meant when he came out and then just. Not asking him about it; also her little excuse of "I grew up in a lab" is supposed to be a thing she says because Max, after she wakes up again, uses the "I was in a coma" excuse all the time and so El kinda decided that that was funny and she wanted to do that too and Max absolutely Adores it; Elmax having a cute little convo and it being broken off by Mike moaning so Loudly fhdvdusv; also pleaseee I love Will's pants!!! I love the shape and the little stars on his back pockets; the way Mike pushes himself up against Will on page 7 and also their linked hands and also the way Mike hugs Will with one arm and pulls Will's shirt and also his own shirt up with it, revealing more hickeys; I also gave both Mike and Will a bracelet and a ring of the opposite person's color <3; Will's green socks and Mike's yellow socks; all the little sounds and scribbles of words Mike and Will say to each other and the way they get more intense toward the end (especially Will's little "you're so-". it's really not that visible, it's on the bottom left corner of the 7th page but I adore it so I wanted to point that one out specifically); Elmax's little giggles at the end and I especially love the way El's face looks in that last frame <333