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A slightly redrawn and edited version of the Dream Library stack (version 3 if you’re counting).

Since I first drew this, my first wish has come true with the final Book of Dust novel having come out (not what I expected, but I liked it)! Which would you most want if you could pick one?

(Currently part of a half price print sale on my shop!)

these are not the same thing.

plot is what happens. story question is what it MEANS. and genre fiction... maybe more than any other category, needs both, because readers come in with expectations and if you only satisfy the plot, they'll finish the book and feel weirdly empty and not know why.

let's break it down.

plot question: will katniss survive the hunger games?

story question: can a system that forces children to kill each other produce a person capable of genuine rebellion, or does it just make better weapons?

you need the first one to keep people turning pages at 2am. you need the second one for the book to mean something when they put it down.

here's where writers go wrong. they spend months engineering a watertight plot, the twists, the reversals, the ticking clock, the satisfying ending, and then wonder why their beta readers say things like "i liked it but i didn't love it" or "something felt missing."

what's missing is the story question. the thing the whole plot is actually ABOUT.

and the frustrating thing is you probably have one. you just haven't named it yet.

how to find yours

finish this sentence about your own work: my plot is about X, but my story is really about ________.

a heist novel: the plot is about stealing a priceless artefact. the story is really about whether loyalty is possible between people who've learned to survive by betraying everyone.

a fantasy epic: the plot is about defeating the dark lord. the story is really about whether power corrupts the people who fight it just as much as the people who wield it.

a romance: the plot is about two people getting together. the story is really about whether someone who's built their whole identity around not needing anyone can let themselves be known.

see how the plot is the vehicle and the story question is the destination?

why genre fiction specifically needs this

because genre readers are SMART. they've read a hundred heists, a hundred chosen one narratives, a hundred slow-burn romances. the plot mechanics aren't enough to surprise them anymore. what keeps them coming back... what makes them press a book into someone else's hands and say READ THIS... is that the story said something they hadn't heard said quite that way before.

the plot gets them in the door. the story question is why they stay.

the test

once you've named your story question, check your ending against it. a satisfying ending doesn't just resolve the plot. it answers the question.

katniss survives (plot). and she's broken in ways the Capitol made her, which means the answer to the story question is: yes, the system produces weapons, and the tragedy is that the rebellion needs her to be one (story).

if your ending resolves the plot but doesn't answer the question, or worse, forgets the question entirely, that's the empty feeling your readers can't name.

name your question. then make sure everything in your story is, in some way, asking it.

— rin t. ✨

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I've compiled all recordings of each pose and slowed the speed a bit so you can have a better look at the process.

How to draw underwater settings: make everything floaty and weightless. Done! ✅ Unless you're a geek like me and want to learn all about how to paint the lighting: the highlights of the ripples, the bluish glow, the reflections.. there's a lot to think about but it's so satisfying once you get it right!

I painted these for last month's Patreon challenge on underwater lighting! If you like drawing challenges, join us: we’re studying wrinkles and folds this month. It's time to walk away from those face-smoothing filters and draw some textured skin!