Writing lyrics and keepinâ it real.
So I remember hearing this idea from an interview with John Lennon. John was talking about keeping it real when writing lyrics more or less. He was making a point that sometimes you will hear lyrics that are sophisticated, over inflated, unrelatable, or just presented in a way that people do not communicate in everyday life; unless I suppose if youâre Maya Angelo. Hehe. His retort to that style of lyrical writing was this comment that pointed out that one doesnât use poetry when they are drowning. They scream help!Â
âWhen youâre drowning, you donât say âI would be incredibly pleased if someone would have the foresight to notice me drowning and come and help me,â you just scream.â
I like considering the distinction he is making here. I, of course, enjoy creativity, metaphor, artistic license; all that jazz. The options are limitless and can express ideas in ways where otherwise languageâs standard rules for the road may have trouble. In the book Beyond Belief: Agnostic Musings for 12 Step Life they point out, âA poem has a greater capacity than a well-crafted theory to being enemies to tears and to encourage them to embrace their foes. Feelings are so much more provocative than thoughts. Art can reach us where sound arguments can not.â
That being said I do very much appreciate what I think John is trying to say here. Literal, but visceral, commentary can be very, very effective. I am assuming it may be the most effective way to connect with a listener. Thatâs probably why that damn phrase âI love youâ is so goddamn over used. But I do recall Stevie Nicks in an interview saying that her grandfather had told her at an early age that you will always be able to sing if you mean what you say. And I have always appreciated many of Don Henley's lyrics because they make such genuine, lucid and profound statements. I think of the chorus from co-dependency ballad âBell Bottom Bluesâ by Derek and there Dominos. âDo you wanna see me crawl across the floor to you? Do you wanna hear beg you to take me back? Iâd gladly do it âcuz I donât want to fade away. Give me one more chance, babe.â Even the raw, straight forward brutality of the lyrics for the song âAngel of Deathâ by Slayer are effective and horrible; as to be intended. So I suppose one could come up with a clever effect by intertwining the two styles together for a more emotionally dynamic song, right? Provoking emotional response = good.









