Eleana's W Component

I think the only thing I’d have to add is that if you want this too look like a more realistic instagram post, the text shouldn’t be in the middle, it is more left hand… if that makes sense?

I think this is a really great way of announcing the show’s cancellation. I think it is very creative to have gone about in in a hiatus-type of manner. This post comes across as very personable and apologetic-but not just expressing sympathy! The audience could really connect to this post, I think it is perfect for that age range.

For my reply tweets, i imagined the company was unapologetic about canceling it but trying to put up a facade that they cared about the audience’s feelings. I did apologize in mine, but i made sure in most of them to plug the other shows on the streaming service. Here’s an example of what I said: “Thank you for your comment! We understand your criticism, and apologize for not meeting your expectations. While we cannot bring back Favorite Show, we can offer you some of our other selections like Unfavorite Show and Ununfavorite Show! #favoriteshow”

I honestly think your mock tweet is awesome. I think it is good to have a bit of comedic relief with your wording, I think it is likely to lessen the blow of the bad news! Also- where did you find that template? Asking for a friend…

That sounds incredibly difficult. I had to edit a video a few days ago for another class and even cutting the video down a few seconds took so long to do. I really hope this all turns out great for you1

I think the title is fine! It explains the content of your guide really succinctly. If you are looking for an alternative, I think I’d suggest making the title, “How to write on Instagram” or something on the sort, just to show that it’s a guide, and then in a subheading below you could write “early Ed teachers edition” like you have there. But I think your title is perfectly fine how it is.

I think you could go about this one of two ways. You could either try and format it before you put the text down, or you could organize the text over multiple slides and then figure out the display of the pages. I feel like the second one might be the best option for this, simply because once you have ur text down, you will be able to see how much space you have for photos or backgrounds and such. I think keeping the dark theme would be really cool, even if the backgrounds and such aren’t just black, but dark colors.

I think your language is great for your audience! The only thing I’d suggest is adding some more display-type features, like bold, font, and colors to really grab the attention of your audience.

I think the content strategy of specifically naming your audience in your videos is really interesting. While it might discourage those who aren’t apart of those goals or central audience from interacting, it might really bring the community together!