Ebby Hell

I already talked about the poor wrinting Non-con on the Satan bloodshed card, but i will nowhave to talk about the Angels Cristmas card.

So first off was what happend on the Angels Christmas card, i knew it was gonna either Non-con or Dub-con because in these part of the story the Angels still hate our MC and see only as an desecent of Solomon. So with the game been open about the dark themes and the fandom craving Angels cards it come to the need for the story to have such themes of the start. HOWEVER these type of themes need to be warned to users before with warnings on the cards, PB having an adult game with dark sexual theme does not justifiy not having trigger warning on the cards and as SOMEBODY WHO WRITES AND DRAW DARK SEXUAL THEMES i personally feel PB has been really dropping the ball on how they handle it. One of the major things wiritings of any adult cotent midia are aware when writing and presenting their content to an audience is to make the audience aware of what they are deciding to get to, it an major thing that Adult Content creators put the warning as an 'aware cosent midia' so the person can choose to egange on it fully aware of it content, these does not bee tied to only dark themes of adult midia but also adult midia that maybe is way more niche and only some people choose to engage on it such Tail penatration or Vore.

With that been said i really dissapointed with the way PB has handle it expecially on their cards, it PB job to make sure that the Adult content they present on their viewers is fully sited on their warning (so watersports, Non-con, somo-play). It is NOT justified on the fact of the game having dark themes and been sexual so people shold already be aware when playing it cause if it was like that none of the Dark Adult games on Steam whold have cotent warning on they.

The Non-con they write also tends to be poorly writed with scenes that break characthers majors personalities to make sense (The Angels Christmas cards were ment to introduce the Angels conflict of hating our MC with desering their bodies, but pushed the Angels personality and conflit to to the side not been abld to tie to the sexual theme of the Non-con and we all know how bad writing Satan was on his bloodshed card). This writing shows to me either an bad managed writer or an beginner one and PB shold work on it.

With that been said the major sing of how bad it is can be found on this Non-con scene.

It clear it was ment to show how far bottom Michael psyche is, how much it pushing him to do worse things. With that, i see the scene very badly writing, been pushed to be short and vague to try not to upset the people (wich i see they did not maneged) and making Michael act complet out of his chracterist self.

No PB putting thzt it was gonna happen on the envent day before does not qualify as an direct trigger warning since the story is daily an ANYTHING can happen, they should be an responsable company and put the trigger warning on the chapter itself, do not say cause "they are an small company we shold cut they some slack", indie Adult dark games with only 2 or 3 people can do it so can they.

Lucifer was one one of the later Kings to awake his true King power do to an major flaw....Lucifer does not have actual self pride.

So you see Lucifer was created to be perfect, he is great in managing people, he is amazing and even present abilites that makes him the most amazing angel said by God and his own brothers, but here is the thing noone of this was achived, it was insted made since birth, Lucifer was build that way. Lucifer major milestones that were ment to build his character were not self discoverd but insted build on his core since day one. He is dated to already be crated perfect making so even if we discover he had something akin to an childhood in future chats i think it was one majorly crafted to make him the perfect servent. That makes so even if Lucifer was an living been, his 'birth' was an creation was made with the major of his self-dicovere striped back from him, and crafted with the only mindof an perfect Angel and servent to God.

But it gets worse...

Lucifer major 'first love' was also striped back from him and imposed by God who commanded, not asked, but commanded to love him making another major lifestone of him been taken. With this i wanna point out something, everytime we see Angel Lucifer he appear like he is very out of place, as in we see him been very direct and objective but way more like an person goin trought the motions of the day rather that somebody who is just direct it gives the impression that....Lucifer has personality disorder.

But you will then point out that Lucifer does have an personal milestone and showes personality and that is with his brothers, and to that i say you right but then i point something else....the seraphins were made cause God wanted Lucifer to have an 'family' putting that into motion it mostly like God trusted the role of 'family' into Lucifer more than an Lucifer wanting one. That cause issues cause now Lucifer is trusted on this new unique role wich even if he is good at it will present issues later do to Lucifer not having actual personal knowledge of how families work. Also Lucifer has more of an deep debt with God now cause Lucifer did like the family in an way but he still has that same direct and serve like way wtih they. Lucifer will show warmt, care and even guide his brothers but it still very interpersonal. The way it writing it makes so Lucifer wants to show more love and care to his brothers but he never learned how to do in an health and personal way what makes Lucifer dote on his brothers an lot and feel pride on they, but he never felt pride on himself for rasing they like this.

This inner conflict gets worse once God 'died', cause now Lucifer is without the major one that was his personality goal and has to deal with his own inner conflicts himself, this makes so the more the Seraphins make bad and worse decisons more Lucifer has to question stuff. Does this is right in the end of all for God? Is this the true path he wanted? Are they doing something wrong?......is this all for God the wrong thing to do? And so we falls, not because the bloobath of this brothers, not because of his errors, but because he finally questioning his own existience and himself.

Lucifer in Hell then meets Gamigin and JJok learning what an real familly is and seeing the error in his ways, it the moment Lucifer finally has an personal milestone. The confrontation with Gabriel was not an moment of brothers having to handle issues, but it was an moment of Lucifer having to confont the duty that was supossed of been his Pride against with something that he discoverd himself and made him feel true Pride....and found family of his own choice. Lucufer waking was an moment were Lucifer had to finally snap and make his own choice, even if he loves his Seraphins he can not stand just doing his duty as his brother anymore, he has to discover himself and find Pride on it. And that is in Hell.

Now in Hell is when Lucifer finally is able to try things for himself and discover stuff for his own Pride. I do think him been an healer was born of an desire to atone for his brothers oast mistakes and to show his ablity in something he is really good for himself. (I belive Lucifer as an Angel was not an healer but combadent since all the Angels have little care for healing, and none of the angels ncps have healing passives). Lucifer show real pride on his abilites as an doctor, aleays been there to heal the other Kings in the events even if acting like no big deal, he even gets mad at Satan and Mammon for destroying his Hospital. Lucifer even discoverd that if for somebody he likes he does enjoy been an butler and servent, but because the person he serve is one he truely loves and is loved. Licifer may be hunted by the ghosts of his past duty as the Seraphins brother. But he found of his most true duty as the King of Pride....finding pride in oneself.

(me on my way to post writing to prove my account is the real me)