âPersuasionâ by Jane Austen
I was surprised by how little charmed I was. My last Austen novel (âMansfield Parkâ) which I read about two years ago (?) seems much more serious, in my memory. Persuasion didn't let me in on a lot of important inner struggles within either Anne or Wentworth. Austen feels more repressed than ever: Anne as a central character is distant, and distances herself from her own emotions; both character and narrator reframe in negatives or "ought have been"s to keep us innoculated from feeling her feelings of despair, self-contempt, or even disappointment with others. It could be that this is connected to Anne's "constancy." At the end of the novel, we find out Anne doesn't even blame herself for following Lady Russell's advice, as a 19 year old. This seems defensible; but how does she deal with the fallout of that justifiable decision? We are told (early on by the narrator) that Anne got over it because of distance of time; we are told (by Anne) that she had no "change of scene" or occupation with which to busy herself, so she never got over it. Where is the virtue in remaining in love with someone who has jilted you? Capt. Wentworth is presumably to blame for the break-up, since he was hurt by her prudence, and too proud to go back to her after a year, once he'd made his fortune; he takes some of the blame on himself -- but he's also valorized, since Anne thinks she should have said yes, and in key scenes, other characters editorialize that getting in the way of a young couple's fervent happiness just because of a little thing like money isn't ever a good idea. We are supposed to think that Anne's feelings were enough that she could have weathered hardship with him, even if it meant losing her family face -- though she never makes this defense of herself. Anne's only manifesto, in the last chapters, is about how long her feelings lasted because she was bored! Speaking of the family: the aristocracy never so neatly parodied and dispensed with: father Sir Elliot is repulsively vain and status-conscious, and so is sister Elizabeth. Not a single strand of authorial sympathy. The narrator intrudes to give us reason not to particularly value many characters: the Musgroves (although they are warm, child-friendly, and unaffected, they are also rather stupid, fat, and impetuous). One of their older sons died; "good riddance," says Austen. Louisa Musgrove proves she is no better than she should be by jumping playfully off some kind of pier on the beach and cracking her head open. She almost dies -- she deserves it, we all agree. Not wife material for a man of understanding like Capt. Wentworth. Ultimately, there's just something lacking in Persuasion. The only character whose basic moral status is unknown for longer than three pages is Capt. Wentworth, and the only compelling problem in the novel is that he has reason to doubt Anne's character; Anne, I think, also has reason to doubt his... yet, Anne just isn't the type. Constant. There are genuinely sweet moments where he moves outside of his posture of resentment and doubt to offer her human kindness: taking the toddler off her back (lol, it's a big deal), getting her a ride in a carriage because she's tired from a walk. Anne is a quiet outsider for much of the book, yet people like her for her understanding and her humility: not her wit, but, perhaps, keeping a cool head in a crisis, and having the "judgment" to know a good pianist from a bad one, a slick performer from an authentic gentleman. Frequently revisited: the loneliness of being the ONLY one in a crowd with good judgment. But this starts to feel somewhat contrived. Family and society shouldn't restrict all of Anne's interactions with others; but it really does. The British Navy has never looked better, and she responds to their fresh, unaffected way of life and conversation -- but we're not sure if she's fit for it. She is respectable and kind. She is not heroic, nor daring; she hurts when her loyalty is suspected, but she does nothing to put herself really in harm's way; every step of the pursuit must be made by others, and we don't even get to hear her declaring her feelings aloud in any of the final conversations with Wentworth. She is the only victim in her family -- of the death of Lady Elliot, of her father's vanity -- and yet she doesn't seem to have much of the "warmth and authentic feeling" that she responds to in others. She's not a radical question, the way that Fanny Price is ("what if you had good morals -- and nothing else?").
March 21, 2020













