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Hello! š Do you have any advice on word-building? I can imagine multiple scenarios in my head, but I can't seem to put them into words. š„¹
First off hi sorry I took forever to write this blog! I hope it helps you get your ideas onto paper <3
Worldbuilding is the backbone of any compelling story, especially in genres like fantasy, science fiction, and historical fiction. Crafting a believable, immersive world can captivate your readers and provide a solid foundation for your narrative. In this guide, Iāll walk you through the essential steps to create a vivid and engaging world for your story.
Understanding Worldbuilding
Worldbuilding involves creating a complete, fictional universe that serves as the setting for your story. This process includes developing geography, cultures, history, politics, and even the rules of nature and magic (if applicable). The goal is to make your world feel as real and intricate as the characters who inhabit it.
Starting with the Basics
Define the Genre and Tone
Consider the genre of your story. A high-fantasy world will have different requirements than a dystopian future or a historical setting. The toneāwhether it's dark and gritty or light and whimsicalāwill also influence your worldbuilding decisions.
Establish the Setting
Start with the physical world. Sketch out maps, outline the geography, and decide on key locations where your story will unfold. Think about the climate, natural resources, and the flora and fauna that inhabit this world.
Develop a History
Create a backstory for your world. Major events, wars, discoveries, and cultural shifts shape the present-day setting. A rich history can add depth and realism, influencing charactersā beliefs and motivations.
Building Cultures and Societies
Craft Unique Cultures
Think about the various cultures in your world. What are their customs, traditions, and social norms? How do they dress, what languages do they speak, and what religions do they follow? Diverse and well-thought-out cultures can add layers to your narrative.
Political Systems and Power Structures
Define the political landscape. Who holds power, and how is it distributed? Are there monarchies, democracies, or tribal councils? Consider the relationships between different nations or groups and the potential for conflict.
Economics and Resources
Understand the economy of your world. What resources are abundant or scarce? How do people trade, and what currencies do they use? The distribution of resources can drive plot points and character motivations.
Crafting Magic and Technology
Magic Systems
If your world includes magic, establish clear rules and limitations. What are the sources of magic? Who can use it, and how? Consistent magic systems prevent plot holes and maintain suspension of disbelief.
Technology Levels
Consider the technological advancements in your world. Are they using medieval weapons, steampunk machinery, or advanced futuristic gadgets? The level of technology can influence daily life, warfare, and exploration.
Time and Place
Historical Context
Establish the timeline of your world. Is it set in the past, present, or future? Consider historical events that have shaped the current state of the world. How have these events influenced societal development and cultural evolution?
Daily Life and Schedules
Describe the daily routines of your characters. What does a typical day look like for different social classes or cultures? Consider work hours, leisure activities, and societal expectations. The pace of life can vary greatly depending on technological advancements and cultural norms.
Timekeeping and Calendars
Develop a system of timekeeping and calendars. Are there specific seasons, festivals, or holidays that are significant? How do people measure timeāby the sun, moon, or a mechanical clock? Unique timekeeping methods can add depth and authenticity to your world.
Clothing and Fashion
Cultural Significance
Explore how clothing reflects cultural identity, status, and occupation. Different regions and social groups might have distinct styles, fabrics, and accessories. What materials are commonly used, and how are garments crafted?
Fashion Trends
Consider the evolution of fashion in your world. What are the current trends, and how do they vary across different societies? Fashion can be influenced by historical events, climate, and interactions with other cultures.
Practicality and Symbolism
Think about the practicality of clothing in your worldās environment. How does the climate affect what people wear? Additionally, consider any symbolic meanings attached to certain garments or accessories. For instance, specific colors or patterns might denote rank or allegiance.
Religion and Beliefs
Pantheon and Deities
Create a pantheon of gods or a single deity, depending on your worldās religious structure. What are their characteristics, domains, and myths? How do they interact with mortals, if at all?
Rituals and Practices
Detail the religious rituals and daily practices of your worldās inhabitants. Consider ceremonies, festivals, and rites of passage. How do these practices influence daily life and societal norms?
Religious Institutions
Define the structure and influence of religious institutions. Are there temples, churches, or shrines? What roles do priests, shamans, or other religious figures play in society? The power dynamics between religious and secular authorities can add layers to your worldbuilding.
Languages and Communication
Linguistic Diversity
Develop the languages spoken in your world. Are there multiple languages or dialects? Consider the history of these languages and how they evolved. Language can be a powerful tool to convey cultural diversity and conflict.
Writing Systems
Design writing systems and scripts used for communication. Are there ancient texts or runes with special significance? How do literacy rates vary among different social classes and regions?
Non-Verbal Communication
Explore other forms of communication, such as body language, sign language, or symbolic gestures. How do people convey messages in situations where spoken language is impractical? These non-verbal methods can add depth and realism to your interactions.
Integrating Worldbuilding into Your Story
Show, Donāt Tell
Instead of dumping information on your readers, reveal your world organically through the narrative. Use dialogue, actions, and descriptions to weave worldbuilding details seamlessly into the story.
Character Perspectives
Different characters will experience and interpret your world in unique ways. Use their perspectives to highlight various aspects of your world, making it richer and more complex.
Consistency and Continuity
Maintain consistency in your worldās rules and details. Keep track of your worldbuilding elements to avoid contradictions and ensure a cohesive narrative.
Worldbuilding Tools and Resources
Maps and Diagrams
Create visual aids like maps, family trees, and diagrams to help you keep track of your worldās layout and relationships. Tools like Inkarnate or Wonderdraft can be helpful for map-making.
Worldbuilding Bibles
Maintain a worldbuilding bibleāa document where you compile all your worldās details. This can include notes on geography, history, cultures, and more. Itās a valuable reference as you write and develop your story.
Inspiration from Real World and Fiction
Draw inspiration from real-world cultures, histories, and landscapes. Similarly, reading widely in your genre can provide insights into effective worldbuilding techniques.
Final Thoughts
Worldbuilding is a rewarding yet challenging aspect of storytelling. It requires imagination, attention to detail, and a deep understanding of your narrativeās needs. By following this comprehensive guide, you can create a vibrant, believable world that will captivate your readers and enhance your storytelling.
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Here's some tips on writing fraternal twins (or any number of fraternal multiples):
- Being asked if youāre identical (bonus points if theyāre boy-girl twins because⦠yeah it happens š)
- Being mistaken as the older/younger sibling
- Your friends donāt realise that you two are related, let alone that youāre twins
- Alternatively, hiding the fact that youāre a twin because you donāt want the comparison
- Being compared to each other no matter how different you are
- Sharing homework answers and doing group projects together because the teachers donāt realise/remember youāre related
- Trying to dress the same or look the same as your sibling (This may be specific to my own experience)
- Not relating enough to identical twins yet the experience is still distinctive from age-gap siblings
AND I CANNOT STRESS THIS ENOUGH:
- STILL having instances of ātwin telepathyā or odd similarities because at the end of the day, you're still twins!
Iāve mentioned before that my mom is an identical twin and I see a lot of her and her sister in the original posts. Iām a fraternal triplet and my experience is a bit different! Let me know if thereās any questions yāall have about this <3
The jobs your MC works can help develop some odd quirks. How have these jobs impacted their views and knowledge?
Maybe theyāve been a birthday clown and now they can keep a kid entertained. Maybe theyāve been worked in a restaurant and can keep calm under pressure. What if their job was a front for a bigger scheme or mission? Are they happy in their job? Do they get along with coworkers, management and customers/clients? These little things can help clarify the type of person your character is.
To be honest, Iāve been in a major writing slump for the past few months. Iām slowly trying to get back on track but part of me doubts my ability to write at all. I wonder if Iām a good writer or if I was just good for my age.
That being said, I donāt think that matters. What counts is that I want to improve and thereās always room for that!
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Write about a traumatised teenage hero navigating through normal life.
At just fourteen, youāve saved the world countless times. Youāve seen, heard and done things that haunt you, but youāve won. You survived and compared to everything else, high school should be easyā¦
But somehow, despite the otherworldly horrors youāve battled, your parents wonāt let you go to the biggest house party of the year. That wonāt stop you, of course⦠but watch out.
So this is my attempt at a Petrarchan sonnet (with no iambic pentameter because my brain hurt trying to figure that out). Itās about my MC (as a kid) standing up for herself for the first time and written from her dad's perspective.
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A retrospective and discussion: The Butterfly Club by Jacqueline Wilson
TW: Implied @buse
Have you ever revisited a book from your childhood and thought: āOh. Wow.ā
This is a long post but after looking at the glowing reviews for this book I feel itās necessary to critique the response of the characters in this story and the message it sends to the readers.
The main events in the book:
- Tina Maynard is a seven-year-old identical triplet, but she is much smaller than her sisters. She also underwent heart surgery when she was a baby and due to this she canāt participate in strenuous activity.
- Tina always relied on her sisters to protect her but this changes when the three girls are split up by their Year 3 teacher, Miss Lovejoy. Tina is placed next to a notorious bully named Selma Johnson and is, predictably, bullied. Notably, Selma flushes Tina's small porcelain doll down a toilet.
- Tina's love for butterflies is referenced throughout the story but it blossoms when she falls sick with pneumonia. During her recovery, Tina draws butterflies in a sketchbook along with facts about each one. After Tina's mum attempts to talk to Selma's mum about the bullying, it is quickly established that Selma does not have a good home life.
- After she recovers, Tina shows her butterfly book to Miss Lovejoy, and this prompts Miss Lovejoy to enlist Tina and Selma's help in creating a butterfly garden for the school. Tina and Selma gradually become friendly due to this.
- Selma invites Tina to her house, and we learn that Selma didnāt actually flush the doll down a toilet, but instead kept the doll for herself. Itās made clear that her stepfather is @bu$ive.
- The class has a bake sale to pay for the butterfly garden and Tina gets 100% on a sponsored spelling test to raise money.
- At the end of the book, Selma gives Tina her doll back and the two girls talk about their butterfly garden on a show called Ruby Red (a cameo of Ruby and Garnet from the book āDouble Actā)
If you experienced some whiplash from that, I donāt blame you. As I reread this book, I saw many glaring issues that go completely unresolved.
From personal experience, I do agree with Miss Lovejoy's decision to split the triplets up and in the story Tina does develop because of that. My issue is with Miss Lovejoy's lack of response to the bullying Tina faced. I understand that it is a complicated situation, but the most that she does is move Tina to a different seat at the same table. Although in this story the situation worked out well, for many kids this isnāt always the case! The reminder that you never know what someone else is going through is clear, but that should not excuse Selma's behaviour.
Speaking of Selma, it is very clearly established that she is in an @bu$ive household, but at no point in this story does anyone try to intervene. Tina's mum actually tells her that she doesnāt have to go to Selma's house again (though I must note that Tina isnāt completely open about what happened) but it was established earlier that Mrs Maynard was aware of some mistreatment. Miss Lovejoy is clearly also aware of this, as at one point she reminds Tina that she is lucky to have a loving family.
I know itās a childrenās book and I know that there are children in these situations. To those who have read the book: what are your thoughts?
A retrospective and discussion: The Butterfly Club by Jacqueline Wilson
TW: Implied @buse
Have you ever revisited a book from your childhood and thought: āOh. Wow.ā
This is a long post but after looking at the glowing reviews for this book I feel itās necessary to critique the response of the characters in this story and the message it sends to the readers.
The main events in the book:
- Tina Maynard is a seven-year-old identical triplet, but she is much smaller than her sisters. She also underwent heart surgery when she was a baby and due to this she canāt participate in strenuous activity.
- Tina always relied on her sisters to protect her but this changes when the three girls are split up by their Year 3 teacher, Miss Lovejoy. Tina is placed next to a notorious bully named Selma Johnson and is, predictably, bullied. Notably, Selma flushes Tina's small porcelain doll down a toilet.
- Tina's love for butterflies is referenced throughout the story but it blossoms when she falls sick with pneumonia. During her recovery, Tina draws butterflies in a sketchbook along with facts about each one. After Tina's mum attempts to talk to Selma's mum about the bullying, it is quickly established that Selma does not have a good home life.
- After she recovers, Tina shows her butterfly book to Miss Lovejoy, and this prompts Miss Lovejoy to enlist Tina and Selma's help in creating a butterfly garden for the school. Tina and Selma gradually become friendly due to this.
- Selma invites Tina to her house, and we learn that Selma didnāt actually flush the doll down a toilet, but instead kept the doll for herself. Itās made clear that her stepfather is @bu$ive.
- The class has a bake sale to pay for the butterfly garden and Tina gets 100% on a sponsored spelling test to raise money.
- At the end of the book, Selma gives Tina her doll back and the two girls talk about their butterfly garden on a show called Ruby Red (a cameo of Ruby and Garnet from the book āDouble Actā)
If you experienced some whiplash from that, I donāt blame you. As I reread this book, I saw many glaring issues that go completely unresolved.
From personal experience, I do agree with Miss Lovejoy's decision to split the triplets up and in the story Tina does develop because of that. My issue is with Miss Lovejoy's lack of response to the bullying Tina faced. I understand that it is a complicated situation, but the most that she does is move Tina to a different seat at the same table. Although in this story the situation worked out well, for many kids this isnāt always the case! The reminder that you never know what someone else is going through is clear, but that should not excuse Selma's behaviour.
Speaking of Selma, it is very clearly established that she is in an @bu$ive household, but at no point in this story does anyone try to intervene. Tina's mum actually tells her that she doesnāt have to go to Selma's house again (though I must note that Tina isnāt completely open about what happened) but it was established earlier that Mrs Maynard was aware of some mistreatment. Miss Lovejoy is clearly also aware of this, as at one point she reminds Tina that she is lucky to have a loving family.
I know itās a childrenās book and I know that there are children in these situations. To those who have read the book: what are your thoughts?
For this prompt, we'll be developing a character. This can be an existing character or you can make a new one!
Think of a main trait this character has and equate it to an animal. For this example, Iāll say my character is as cunning as a fox.
The next step is simple and may lead you down a rabbit hole: look up traits of that animal and find one that diverts your expectations.
Did you know foxes are shy and try to avoid interactions?
These quirks donāt have to be as obvious, though. Maybe your character and this animal share a favourite food? Maybe their sleep patterns are similar (or your character wishes they were). Your character could have great hearing or prefer community over solitude.
Ideally, you should mix up traits. For my example character, Iāll say my character is as cunning and shy as a fox but as loyal and friendly as a dog.
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The book that changed my life. (Neurodivergent book rec)
I am autistic and I have always been autistic. Growing up, I knew something was different about me but I had no idea what it was. Having been diagnosed quite recently, I'm still learning to listen to myself and accept my needs.
āA kind of sparkā by Elle McNicoll has changed my life.
It is a middle grade book, but I encourage any neurodivergent readers to give it a try. The story revolves around Addie, an eleven-year-old autistic girl, and her goal of creating a memorial for the wrongly accused āwitchesā of her town's past. I've never related to a book so deeply in my life. Itās given me insight into my own mind and for that reason I want to share it with you.