ā¢: You need to work on character responses, they tend to be bland.
ā: Your RP responses are really short/ could have more effort put in!
Ī£: Youāre messing up your punctuation here and there.Ā
ā¼: Try to improve your spelling/Grammar
āÆ: Try to open up to more RPers, youāre great, but youāre missing out on a lot of potentially amazing RPs!
ā²: Try to be more positive on yourself, thereās no reason to hate on yourself so much.Ā
ā : You need to be more respectful.
Ā ā: You need to improve your action sequences or reactions of characters.Ā
ā¤: Youāre doing amazing, we can always improve but every RP I read of yours is a joy.
ā: Message more RPers and get some more activity going please.Ā
ā¶: Fight scenes could use more work.
Ā ā„: Romantic Scenes can be awkward, do your best to improve on this, and look out for common pitfalls!
ā: You might want to take another look at your character/characters and work on them a bit more. Every great character has a flaw or two.Ā
āŖ: Joker *Whatever you feel needs to be addressed*Ā