Late to the party

WAIT I ALREADY USED HIS NAME IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH THAT’S WAY TOO MUCH

and

I ALREADY USED ‘SAID’ THREE TIMES IN THIS CHAPTER THEY’LL ALL THINK I’M BLAND

and

WASN’T HIS HAND JUST ON HIS STOMACH HOW DID IT END UP ON HIS FACE

and

I ALREADY USED THAT PHRASE/SENTENCE TWO CHAPTERS AGO

and 

WHY IS HE ALL NICE ALL OF A SUDDEN HOW DO I KEEP THEM IN CHARACTER 

Am I being overly/awkwardly descriptive?

Am I repeating myself too much?

Wait, that thing I just referenced? I remembered to include that in a previous chapter, right?

I HATE WRITING FIGHT SCENES! WHY ARE THEY SO HARD TO WRITE?!

Are readers noticing the plot-threads/arcs?

*writes 1-2 pages worth of material* *hates it/doesn’t feel like it’s flowing with the story* *deletes it* *a few days later wishes I didn’t delete it because I realized how to make it work*

Personal experience makes writing this character’s anxiety and depression pretty easy for me…but am I showcasing him moving on with his life while living with PTSD realistically?

Is this story too boring for readers?

I’m four fics into this series, probably need a timeline at some point huh since I think the second, third, and fourth happened several months after the first but they were within the span of two days? Maybe?

*rereads own fic for refresher, gets distracted by own beautiful turns of phrase, gloats over comments, writes exactly 3 words on new fic*

The word anus isn’t sexy...is it?

Is it too realistic? 

What else can I compare the taste of dick to? 

What are thighs if not milky!?

No, anus isn’t sexy. Don’t write anus.

Is this imagery a little too much? Do I just sound like a total fuckwit?

There was more but it stayed a sketch

Art by 2y

ho shit risque?!?!? ME?!?!? DRAW THAT?!

It kinda looks like one of those weird fragrance commercials lol but whATEVER bY E