Un-writer of things

Link to 20xx tokyo galatea, my Akechi x reader/OC slowburn fanfiction! Finally reached chapter 22 out of 30-ish… So glad I got to this point honestly. Been thinking about this chapter since the very beginning, and this was definitely one of the biggest sources of motivation along with reader feedback.

Summary

In an attempt to slow down the rate of love confessions he receives and divert the public’s attention from the mental shutdowns and psychotic breakdowns, Akechi tries to find someone to play the role of his princess.

Ayano is a quiet, boring, average student devoid of individuality and lacking any passions or dreams. She has never approached the Akechi Goro before, shows no interest in his celebrity status, and seems mature enough that he can imagine going on mandatory dates with her without feeling like gouging one of his eyes out.

Having gotten back into it (for as long as this hyperfixation phase will last), reread the story, I see a thousand things I can do better now. Choices that seem questionable. Characterization that can be handled differently, or more in-depth.