Hello! I'm Carol, a Brazilian who loves writing, reading, ancient history, world mythologies and folklore. This blog is mostly for reblogging other people's writing, but sometimes I also share snippets of my wips or other things I find interesting.
My main wips right now are a quiet science-fantasy novel about a seamstress spider going on a journey to save her village, focusing on fictional folklore but also inspired by the real-world Andes; and a really convoluted grimdark contemporary fantasy thing set in my country. I also love short stories, so I might talk more often about the many short wips I'm working on!
(One of them even got published a couple years ago! You can read it here or in the Sun Rising anthology by Flame Tree Publishing.)
I run on battery-saving mode most times, so sorry if you don't see me replying much to asks and tag games. But I love being tagged on your writing or any other posts you think I'll like! :D
Just please don't add me to taglists without asking.
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Thank you so much for the tag, @diphthongsfordays!! Let's check in on Quintus the Necromancer again...I'm sure he's doing juuuust fine ;)
Fresh:
“Good grief,” Quintus manages, his voice hoarse in his throat. “Does it need stitching?”
“I don’t know.”
“Then show me how big it is.”
Nikolaos’s right hand comes around, two of the fingers glistening with fresh blood. His thumb and first finger spread, describing a space the size of a large apple.
“Good grief,” Quintus repeats. “Yes, it needs stitching.”
“Wonderful,” Nikolaos says, in the most un-wonderful tone Quintus has ever heard.
Dull:
All her training is suddenly gone when faced with this mountain of a man. Miriam looks down the flat of his blade – Nikolaos’s blade – and quails in her stockings. How can she hope to survive with only this dull, diminutive, dagger?
Breathe, Daniel says in her mind. Shoulders loose. If you have the smaller weapon, rob him of his reach.
Miriam charges, ducking under the pirate’s arm and slashing with her blade. He has to twist to avoid her strike, and in the moment before he can turn, she slips past him and sinks her knife into his back.
Peace:
They’re shown the water pump outside, handed a stack of blankets and a lantern, and left alone for the night. The inky dark settles around Quintus like a lover’s arms, and he looks more at peace than he has in many days when he looks over at Nikolaos.
Free:
“Is something wrong?” comes Miriam’s voice, thick with sleep.
“No, nothing,” Nikolaos calls back immediately, sitting up and taking ahold of Quintus’s face with his free hand. “Go back to sleep.” To Quintus, he adds quietly, “Breathe, you blockhead.”
Quintus does, buoyed by the hand against his heart, the hand warm under his chin, around the side of his face. It is grounding, to be held like this, forced to be still. His tripping heart finally starts to take notice.
Tags: @the-inkwell-variable @sleepyowlwrites @pluttskutt @cheerfulmelancholies @reneesbooks @chauceryfairytales @writingrosesonneptune @thegreatobsesso and anyone else who'd like to play with the words wince, wonder, want, and weather 🌥️
OP: Why couldn’t traditional Chinese Yinpiao银票/silver drafts be forged if they were merely slips of paper? (cr大明宝钞,渐越)
Traditional Chinese yinpiao/silver drafts were paper vouchers issued by private banks starting from the Song Dynasty(960–1279). People could exchange these slips for physical silver at bank branches across the country.
Silver drafts were made in multiple copies with matching serrated seal edges. One copy went to the customer and others stayed at the bank. All edges had to fit perfectly together to withdraw silver. The unique split edge marks were almost impossible to copy.
This mechanism is known as qifeng骑缝 (split-joint seal) in China. It first originated in the Western Zhou Dynasty (1046–771 BC). The Rites of Zhou records that contracts were written on bamboo or wooden slips in duplicate. Notches and marks were carved in the middle before splitting the slips, with each party keeping one half. The two halves would be matched by their notches for verification.
During the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods (770–221 BC), this idea evolved into hufu虎符/tiger tally tokens. A military tally was split into two pieces with identical inscriptions carved along the split edge. Troops could only be deployed if the patterns and characters on both halves perfectly aligned, serving as a metal version of the split-joint anti-counterfeiting system.
The technology matured in the Tang Dynasty (618–907). Government documents and private contracts commonly used split-joint seals stamped across the dividing line. The Chinese character "hetong合同" (contract) was written across the middle before the paper was torn apart, so the complete characters would only appear when the two halves were put together. This split-coupon system was later adopted for Song Dynasty (960–1279) jiaozi paper money and yinpiao/silver drafts of the Ming and Qing dynasties (1368–1912).
Official Song dynasty paper money (Jiaozi交子) was abolished in 1107. Private silver drafts issued by Qing-era piaohao票行 (ancient exchange banks) vanished completely in 1951, hit hard by modern banks and currency reforms. Nowadays silver drafts no longer circulate as currency. Their collectible value depends on their rarity and physical condition.
Split-joint seals (骑缝章qifengzhang)are still widely used on important paper documents in modern China, an anti-tampering technique passed down from ancient times. They are applied across the edge of multi-page contracts, bidding documents and official archives. If any page is removed or replaced, the broken seal pattern can prove the file has been altered.
i saw a tumblr post a while ago that implied that the purpose of book reviews is to help the author get better at their craft by evaluating the book and pointing out its strengths and weaknesses, and i disagree with that so strongly. a book review is not for the author of the book you’re writing about. it’s for potential readers, and readers who want to see someone else’s thoughts on the book. and on a more personal level, it’s for you, the reviewer, to bring your own analysis and your unique perspective to the review. a book review is about the book you’re reviewing, obviously, but it’s also about you, and what that book meant to you, and why it affected you the way it did. a book review can and should discuss the strengths and weaknesses of the book, but not for the purpose of instructing the writer how to improve their craft. that’s not your job. the author of the book may read your review, but if you have the idea that you’re writing for them, that you’re their editor or pr manager, then you misunderstand the purpose of a book review, and your review will suffer for it.
Thank you for the tag, @talesofsorrowandofruin!! 💛
A line where someone is saying someone's name:
Nikolaos’s dark gaze is searching. His pupils are slightly dilated. “What do you ask of me, Quintus?”
A line featuring a vehicle:
Quintus, limping behind him, sweating through his borrowed shirt, exhausted from carrying only his sword, glares down at the sight of his boots passing over every pebble and crack in the earth. “Only one horse? Why not a carriage?”
A line featuring a food:
Quintus picks at the sweet pear tart and the rich goat’s cheese and the soft, fresh bread. Nikolaos is ravenous, but he holds himself back. Dying always seems to make him starved.
A line that makes no sense out of context:
Nikolaos’s mouth quirks. “We got the peacock.”
I'll tag @reneesbooks @mrbexwrites @zmwrites @sunset-a-story @talesfromaurea @pertinax--loculos @loopyhoopywrites and anyone else who sees this and wants to join in! Your lines are:
A line about a piece of clothing
A line featuring a smell
A frightened line
A line with the word forget
A line about a kiss <3
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the fact that the tra la la lally elves don’t show up when frodo et al. arrive in rivendell implies a few options to me:
they are only there some of the time or at certain entrances (possible but prosaic, includes the potential for tra la la lallying as shift work)
elrond’s magic has some kind of built-in warning system and they cleared out to avoid potential danger (plausible and realistic considering that i don’t think team tra la la lally is either interested in fighting or skilled in emergency response)
the changing political climate and increased danger around rivendell resulted in all tra la la lallying activities being moved inside the valley (which begs the question of where, and if they just manifest barbershop quartet style beneath guests’ windows)
elrond didn’t know about it until bilbo unwittingly mentioned the experience over dinner, and all roadside tra la la lallying was brought to an end (either petering out without the allure of secrecy or simply by the power of elrond’s consternation)
the whole thing was contrived solely to troll the dwarves (elucidates the standout conformity of only these elves to historic ‘tree-dwelling hippies’ stereotypes)
bilbo fully made it up (this was revealed when merry and pippin cheerfully asked elrond when the tra la la lallying would start, and elrond said ‘gesundheit’)
assuming the tra la la lally elves are real, though, i’m so certain that it was a celebrían-manufactured conceit made permanent by her shameless use of a parting wish to a weeping and dock-bound elrond right before they were sundered for centuries. she was leaning over the rail of the boat to valinor shaking her fist and yelling that they had to sing the song she wrote and not some sad sappy poem meant to attract maglor. yes, with all the tra la la lallies. or else.
I was going to make the joke idea “play one of the tralalalally Elves, whose only skill is singing” and then I remembered two things.
First, song is immensely important in Middle Earth, to the point where some of the most powerful character moments and magic effects we see are done through singing and poetry. The tra la lally gang are most likely quite powerful sorcerers!
Second, the song mentions many of the Dwarves and Bilbo by name, which means they are either capable of foresight or very well-informed by mundane means. Certainly not the giddy bards the appear to be.
Did I need to add any more books to my TBR shelf? No, absolutely not. But could I resist buying Disfigured: On Fairy Tales, Disability and Making Space by Amanda Leduc? Also, no.
Time to put this on the pile on my bedside table under Queer as Folklore 🫣
“I want to feel all there is to feel, he thought. Let me feel tired, now, let me feel tired. I mustn’t forget, I’m alive, I know I’m alive, I mustn’t forget it tonight or tomorrow or the day after that.”—Dandelion Wine by Ray Bradbury
Not too much writing this month because 1) I was on vacation with my family at the start of June and 2) act 2 is still kinda daunting to write. Not because it's particularly large or 'action packed' per se, but just because I've changed quite a bit of things from the original act 2 so I'm partially flying blind here haha
Finished Fenice and Charles' letters to each other to briefly bridge the acts together
Fenice in these opening chapters is going to really show the readers wtf is wrong with her lol
Also starting to introduce kyr-Luxana (official first name still pending), the Tempus Praetori.
EXCERPT
But despite seeing it, this ugly and gaping wound her father’s campaign wrought upon this land, Fenice felt no profound sense of shock, or despair, or horror, or…
Maybe if she was not this child of portent and ruin. Not born from war hungry hands and raised with stories of myth and legacy and legend. Maybe if she was anybody else but Fenice vi Aetier, she might’ve felt a shred of sympathy for these poor people.
Instead, she looked at the kingdom her father carved out of the map, and the people Luxana’s policies were slow to reach in his attempts to turn himself from soldier to courtier, and thought: I could do much better than this.
Why should she be confined to the pearly shores of Lurs-e-Luran, untouched by the war, when she could be here. Here near the heart of its ruin. Where before her laid a tabula rasa from which she could carve her first marks into history.
The blood of conquerors and kingmakers flowed through her veins. Surely, her father could not blame her for following in the footsteps of those that made her?
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It feels like forever since I've done one of these, hooray!! :) Thanks for the tag, @memento-morri-writes. (and no, this is not the tag from yesterday, this one is much older and i'm sorry) I'm looking for knock, snow, control, and old, in my necromancer WIP <3
Knock:
Roslyn stretches across the table to reach the butter, and Nikolaos hands it to her without waiting for her to ask, or worse, knock something over. The little one tugs on his arm and whispers in his ear, and he pours more milk into her tin cup.
Snow:
Quintus smiles. He’s like a being of the landscape in the low, harsh light of the moon on the snow – hair black as the sky, smile as bright and gleaming as their icy surroundings.
“Of course, you’re taking his side,” he says.
“He’s already dead,” Nikolaos says, and thinks, lucky bastard. “Leave him alone.”
Control:
They are talking about it again. Miriam calculates her losses and her victories, and carefully says, “How badly does it hurt?”
Quintus says nothing, but his entire face screws up as though he can’t control it anymore. He looks miserable.
Miriam can’t help it. “Oh, Quintus,” she says under her breath.
He does not tell her to mind her own business. He does not tell her to keep her pity. He does not move.
Old:
“You are a curious woman.”
Miriam scrunches into a ball, slides her feet from the blanket. The morning air is cool to the touch, and her skin prickles. “And you are a subject of great mystery,” she replies. “Let’s cease with stating the obvious.”
“The mystery grows old after a while.” Nikolaos rolls to his feet, graceful even first thing in the morning.
🍧Passing on tags to anyone who sees this and wants to join in, and also @pertinax--loculos @thegreatobsesso @zinabug-writes @mic-writes @rodentwrites @revenantlore @winterandwords and @chauceryfairytales!! Your words are suppose, spark, shield, and submit <3
me: am i being too heavy-handed with the sss sounds to emphasise how like a snake this creature is?
me:
me: *remembers Tolkien named that ^ slippery bastard "worm-tongue"*
me: yeah we can add more sss sounds
High upon the crown of its blood-red leaves bloomed the single black flower. Its petals looked as sumptuous the velvet cloak her mother had once mended for a passing noblewoman, the whole blossom shimmering with the promise of health – and twined around the base of the tree, barring her way, was the beast.
It had something of the stoat in its sleek, dark fur and lithe form, and something of the serpent in its arrow-shaped visage and endless, sinuous coils. Winter had slowed it, that much was obvious, but its unblinking yellow eyes were full of smouldering malice as its gaze slid languidly towards her.
She was woken at 7 on the dot by something heavy planting itself on her chest.
“What—” She opened her eyes reluctantly to investigate. “Oh. Hello, Enya.”
Enya chirped a greeting, and bounced her tail onto Isi’s stomach. It was unfortunately reminiscent of Enya’s mother’s much heavier, spiked, tail.
“Can I help you?” said Isi.
Enya made a grumbling noise and snapped at empty air. Then she hopped down onto the floor and gestured with her nose in the direction of the dining table.
the basics: she/her; 34; baby dragon with dark red scales and fan-like frills behind her head <3
Enya summed up: Enya is about the size of a cat and behaves a bit like one. she loves scritches and riding on people's shoulders (usually Isi and Robin), and does not love not being fed on time. she sings sometimes! she also chirps, trills and growls.
role: cutest member of the team and a key part of the inciting incident
non-spoilery fun fact: Enya, like all female dragons, has frills like a frill-necked lizard!
Just betaed for a friend and her writing is way better than mine. Fuck yeah inspiration. I will improve. You guys wait like five fuckin years and I'll write something great that makes you all cry. Just you wait.
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I have finished a decent draft of a new gothic novella, and I'm looking to get some fresh eyes on it before I lock in with detail editing.
The Tower of Briars is a gothic fairytale in the form of a 17.5k novella. I'm looking for general story feedback, though if you are knowledgeable about (very loosely) 1840s England, I would love any extra help improving those aspects.
I'm hoping to have the book out in October, so I'd like to get feedback in by mid-August, to give me time to fix and edit things.
Content warnings for standard gothic elements (death, narrative dooming, incest) apply. This is a work of Romantic Horror.
Anyway, if you're interested, leave a comment or DM me!