ummm as ONE of the several under his watch enjoyers some things id like to see include but are not limited to:john testing gale's patience and being a brat (it's fun), gale battling internally about developing feelings for john (it's wrong it's unethical it's unprofessional) and ofcourse always always gale getting tortured (could be for example him needing to actually bodyguard becos there's an actual serious threat, something bad happens and he gets hurt)
MHM NOW THATS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT but actually thank you so much for this input i appreciate it sm!
bratty john you’ll always be famous!!!! yes it’s definitely fun to write john giving gale an aneurism lol he’s so difficult
also as for gales internal conflict do the people want a chapter from gales pov or just allude to his struggle through johns perception
originally i was gonna just do johns pov because it keeps gale mysterious and shows what’s going on in johns head as he figures gale out. however if it would add a little spice to reading i would be so down to do an occasional gale chapter (lmk pls!!)
and yes have no fear gales job is gonna involve more than just babysitting next chapter!
anyway i feel like a broken record saying this but i really do appreciate the patience and any and all suggestions, input and thoughts!
also sorry for my grammar/spelling, i’m writing this at the bank so im rushing lol













