Ashwinis_world

New to writing so need some help and guidance for my theme.

Am feeling very interested in novels theme which are actually rich in inner monologue or multi pov like 8-9 characters inner pov.

Where we don't actually show everything from the start but everything is actually starting with inner monologue and inner world where we are also living with characters!!!!

Am writing a novel where am exploring theme of soft and slow healing, depression, psychology, suspense, slow burn type , where we are walking with character not as their readers but as their emotions.

MC’s POV – About Zayne

Sometimes, I don’t really understand Zayne. I mean, he’s the kind of genius everyone sees as cold and stoic — that first impression you get from a distance. I thought he’d be serious, mysterious, hard to talk to. Especially after not seeing him for so long...

But it didn’t take much time for that image to fall apart.

Not because he changed — but because I started to see him. The real him.

Maybe we were a little distant at first. Polite, careful. But somehow, quietly, it feels like he knows me better than most people ever tried to.

Even when I try to hide how I feel behind a nervous smile, or a half-hearted joke… he never pushes me to open up.

He just stays there. Not asking, not leaving. Just being. And sometimes, that’s exactly what I need.

Like that time he had a toothache and I told him to stop eating sweets.

He said, “Doctors like to exaggerate.”

I almost choked laughing like "Zayne you are a doctor too so it means you also like to exaggerate"— I didn’t expect him to be this sarcastic. Or this... childish. In the cutest way.

He’s still the Zayne everyone talks about — brilliant, distant, unreadable. But now, to me… he’s also the guy who makes quiet spaces feel safe. Who makes me laugh when I least expect it.

Maybe he never truly was a cold person to begin with. He just doesn't know how to express himself with words, but when he express himself he kinda just leave me speechless 'like I was not expecting this from you Zayne'.

He sometimes even come across as a straight shooter which make me doubt my first impression of him in hospital too.

Also I also noticed that he will usually likes to express things with body language like little smirk, little smile, even his eyes will sometimes twinkle too.

It truly make me amazed that how we even become so close that it feels like a dream... It makes me want more , want to see him, want to share every excitement every new things with him.

Maybe sometimes it just happens where we meet someone who make us feels that everything is amazing. Like to know them, to understand them, to talk to them, to share every small things with them, even their name fill our heart with happiness.

'Zayne'

It just feels like .... We were never really apart from the beginning.